Keniisu

Nice. Now ya have to work at picking up where you left off

I've added your GitHub to the list. ^-^ Thanks for informing me about it.

Folmar: http://cobbtocs.co.uk/wp/?page_id=76

Vlue: http://daimonioustails.weebly.com/

Victor engine scripts (dropbox down, link is to his google drive) https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B5uvwXLAev89ZTVQRTd2T0EwQlk&usp=sharing

otherwise his site would be https://victorscripts.wordpress.com/

Galv's scripts: http://galvs-scripts.com/

Tsukihime's: http://himeworks.com/

Neon Black/Dekita: https://cphouseset.wordpress.co...

It cut me off xD

So, the Neon Black one.. https://cphouseset.wordpress.com/scripts/

Mr. Trivel's

https://mrtrivelvx.wordpress.com/scripts/

And I think that's it for the ones with 10+ scripts that I know of.

it's need reworks like using parentheses everywhere's is useless and need other tweak but this a good start I rewrited the script for show you how you could make this because ...you add to much useless code give me few minutes

Thanks nio! I appreciate the help a whole lot. I messaged you a question that I wanted to ask.

Thanks everyone for the help! ~ Will keep note of these tips. :3

If your problem is keeping your characters coherent, that would work. If the problem is pacing, try to think of every single action as something that comes out of a trigger. A said X, B answered Y, which made A reply Z, making B question Y.


For example.

Also, sorry if this is spamming or flooding or both or none, but listening to podcasts works marvels. Dialogues are conversations, and what better method to learn how to write conversations than listening to actual conversations?

the video is private ;o is that right?

Keniisu is getting it all sorted out now. It will be available shortly.

It's public now. :3

Always work on your foundations before adding anything new

It's always good to get what you're currently doing done to a degree you're satisfied with it and won't make any changes to it. After you've done that, then you can add new content. It's always tempting to add new stuff when the idea pops into your head, but don't. Write down the ideas somewhere if you must, but perfect the current systems before adding new ones. Otherwise you end up with games like Destiny.

Focus!

Love the title.

Love the title.

"Cluttered Mess", where's the mess? Scrolls need something to catch the player's attention, I imagines it's pretty important, sparkles perhaps?

The point of the screenshot thread is to get feedback, not just post a perfect map for praise. If you're wanting feedback before it's perfect just post there.

That being said, your kitchen wall is too high, it needs to be a tile shorter. It also looks a bit large and bare. Hard to see all the rooms but it's the overall impression I get. That kitchen is huge. Make rooms more compact and add some clutter.

Game & Map Screenshot thread please.

What happened to your last projects?

Well, most of my work for Octanis was lost due to Computer failures. Also, most of the ideas/work from Octanis will be revamped into Ormova.

that kinda sucks :U

Same here, but allways think, maybe tomorrow. (\s/)

Just in time for IGMC xD

It's a bit laggy

It's lag indeed :/

Sorry for the lag issue. Could be my PC trying to work with the Twitch network....My apologies.