Alkorri's Proofreading Workshop - CURRENTLY CLOSED!

[Alkorri]

Nosleinad, I've finished editing your demo. Please refer to your PM.

@Iron Croc - I understand you are still writing your synopsis. Take your time and send it over anytime.

 

[Nosleinad]

I highly recommend Alkorri's work, as it's very professional. It also comes with lots of minor details that stands on a professional project.

Thanks a lot Alkorri.

 

[Chaos17]

Hello,

I would like to know if you will only work on small projects?
Or working little by little on a big project is all right too?

I'm asking you this because my project will be long, but all my sub chapters are kind of 1 hour length.
Thus I'm interested to know if it will be ok with you to exercise with me sub chapter with sub chapter?

I'm sorry for my poor English.

 

[Alkorri]

Hi there. Apologies for the late reply, and no need to say sorry for your English. I only know two sentences of French myself.

I'm afraid if I were to work on your game chapter by chapter, this would delay other requests. Not only that, I have other paid work I must attend to as well. However, I would be happy to work on one of your hour-long chapters if you request

I do plan to accept larger jobs eventually, through a commercial proofreading workshop.

 

[Simon D. Aelsi]

Sent it off to you.

 

[Alkorri]

Hi there, Iron Croc. I've sent your synopsis to you by PM.

 

[Simon D. Aelsi]

Bravo! Alkorri's a highly skilled writer who can help breathe new life into nearly any tired and worn project.  Five stars!

 

[Alkorri]

Glad to help

 

[luiscesjr]

I'd like to be on the list for after 20 of september! I won't be even close to finish my game 

by that time, but I want you to revise my story, I'm not in a hurry.

Even though my game and it's story are in portuguese, I may write down what I was planning to

use as a resume of it's main questline, translate it to english.

(Even though my english is not good, I guess it's at least barely understandable =).

I would be really glad I could participate, and happily wait.

 

[Bonkers]

I wanted to say thank you to Alkorri for their services and recommend you consider them for improving the quality of your game.  

I'm very happy with the help they have offered, and managed to correct quite a few flaws with my dialogue grammar and flow.

 

[Alkorri]

Thank you for the kind words, palladinthug! It was a pleasure playtesting your game as well

@luiscesjr - I would be happy to help, although I'm not clear what text you want me to review. Are you talking about dialogue or your short story?

 

[luiscesjr]

@luiscesjr - I would be happy to help, although I'm not clear what text you want me to review. Are you talking about dialogue or your short story?

My short story, the resume.

Like, is it being somewhat coherent? Or well, is it interesting enough? Maybe I need more "life" into the project,

I don't know. 

It's not really the dialogue, sorry not to make it so clear =)

 

[Alkorri]

As long as it's not too long, as mentioned in my original post Sure send it over and I'll get to it after the 20th.

 

[luiscesjr]

No, not long at all, it's really a "short" story =)

Thanks, I will send it over as soon as I can.

 

[nio kasgami]

Name of Game or title of Text: Nya Quest
Type: RPG
Genre of game (if applicable): Comedy
Estimated length: 1 hour
American English or British English : hee....what is the difference...?
Link (if applicable): you remember this game aniway : D 
Other details: 

is more if you still wanted to work with me on the game I wanted to put but sadly I had to stop the progress D:  due the fact  of the internet lost!

but I know you begin to work with me so is more for ask if you still want to work with me x3!

 

[Simon D. Aelsi]

American English or British English

Plenty.  Grammar differences. Spelling differences. Mannerism differences. Different expressions. Different words.

 

[Alkorri]

What Iron Croc says

Nio, if I understand correctly you just want to brainstorm the story for Nya Quest? If so, we can communicate by PM!

 

[Evan Finkel]

Hi Alkorri,

• Name of Game or title of Text: Machine Ghost
• Type: RPG
• Genre of game (if applicable): Horror, Steampunk
• Estimated length: Not finished yet.
• American English or British English British English.
• Link (if applicable): Not yet released.
• Other details: PM sent.

 

[Alkorri]

Your text is done, Zalett!

 

[Evan Finkel]

Thank you Alkorri!

Can I leave some of my feedback on her work? Alkorri is an highly recommended super awesome writer, she works so fast with no mistakes even not spelling mistakes!

If you need to float up your boats, hire her!