Alkorri's Proofreading Workshop - CURRENTLY CLOSED!

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Alkorri, if I can give you the list of all dialogs in the game but it still have more than 2 hours gameplay. Would you still do it for free?
 

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It depends how much proofreading is needed, to be honest. If all the dialogue is in one file, that would be easier for me, as comprehensive editing (meaning nearly every line has to be edited) can be tedious and time consuming.

Tell you what, put in a request anyway and I'll see how it goes :)
 

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I would prefer you put in an actual request, but all done!
 

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How did I forgot to post here!

Alkorri is a goddess of words.. d(*_*)

What are you looking at? Hire her!
 

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Err, thanks for the support, Evan. Although this workshop is free ;)

I am gonna open a shop in a few days tho :)
 

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Is this still something that you are active with? I would love to have a guiding hand in my story, characters and dialouge. I feel that my project has come to a small hold, due to me being a bit unsure about how to tie the plot together. My motivation is not as good as it used to be, and this might be just what I need in order to get my spark back, and progress with the game as I used to do when I initially started.
 
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This workshop is indeed still active, Dark :) Feel free to request and/or PM whatever issues you need help with.
 

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For a vietnamese with not so good english...THIS IS GOLD!
I don't need this yet but i'll ask for your help when i'm done my game :)
*But it'll have longer than 2 hours though...*
 
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I'm constantly surprised people have to ask.

She has a venus statue of fertility on her avatar... :I
I thought that avatar it's a fat rock with abs wearing christmas hat and have two tiny hands
 

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Does this apply solely to game projects? If I sent you a Word document detailing my project's back story and main story, would you be able to dissect it? It's not a script, though. It's just an overview of the events in the game.
 
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@Alkorri Do you accept requests for a short full-game? Ah, around 2 hours of gameplay (Most of the times in battle, but little dialogues)?
 

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That is indeed a great topic...

  • Name of Game or title of Text: Chronicles of the Crystal Wars
  • Type: RPG
  • Genre of game: fantasy
  • Estimated length: present pre-demo is around 1h30 (very linear game without any side quests)
  • American English or British English French english at the moment ;) (would like it to be a simply correct english, whatever side of the atlantic ocean it comes from)
  • Link: here
  • Other details: check out the thread in my sig' please; I am willing to discuss a remuneration for a proofreading of the complete game when it will be finished or while it is being developped

Thanks in advance for considering this request  :)
 

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Hello there, Gui. Thanks for putting in a request! I am sorry for the late reply, but I was on a deadline. Actually, still am on my deadline :) Do you mind very much if I could get around your request next week?

For everyone else, I'm going to put a message saying I'm on hiatus in my first post :)
 
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Hello there, Gui. Thanks for putting in a request! I am sorry for the late reply, but I was on a deadline. Actually, still am on my deadline :) Do you mind very much if I could get around your request next week?

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Not at all: I still have plenty of work to do on this demo and I will not be able to honor the "end of the month" deadline anyway, so take your time.

Thanks for accepting to help: much appreciated, really  :)
 

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