Alkorri's Proofreading Workshop - CURRENTLY CLOSED!

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Not at all: I still have plenty of work to do on this demo and I will not be able to honor the "end of the month" deadline anyway, so take your time.


Thanks for accepting to help: much appreciated, really  :)
Perhaps I can take on your request, Gui. Alkorri, would you mind if I proofread the demo while you're busy?
 

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Perhaps I can take on your request, Gui. Alkorri, would you mind if I proofread the demo while you're busy?


Blinn, this is someone's resource workshop, so please don't take their work, no matter how kind your intentions were.
 

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Blinn, this is someone's resource workshop, so please don't take their work, no matter how kind your intentions were.


I apologize.
 

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I appreciate you chipping in, Celianna, and Blinn for offering :) I might re-open this workshop too, soon as I figure out how to edit my OP and fix those spoiler tags.


Also, GUI was talking about something way back in February 2015 ;)  
 

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Hello Alkorri!


Do you accept new request for proofreading? I'm not a native english speaker, so my game need some help of someone like you //rmwforums.s3.amazonaws.com/emoticons/default_biggrin.gif


My game : Rpg Fighter League


Type: RPG Fighting game in differents League. (


Amount of time in game is at your choice.


Here the link of the website if you want more info about the project.






If you want to download the demo and see what it look like: 


https://rpgfighterleague.wordpress.com/play-rfl/


If you want any more info about my game just write on this thread or send me a private message, thanks for your help //rmwforums.s3.amazonaws.com/emoticons/default_smile.gif
 

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Hi, Val. I'll take a look soon as I get back to my computer //rmwforums.s3.amazonaws.com/emoticons/default_smile.gif


Okay, I have played an hour of your demo and have PM'd you my proofreading notes! Hope that helps.
 
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Hi, Val. I'll take a look soon as I get back to my computer //rmwforums.s3.amazonaws.com/emoticons/default_smile.gif


Okay, I have played an hour of your demo and have PM'd you my proofreading notes! Hope that helps.


Yes thank you Alkorri! you have really better skill then myself to proofreading the script of my game. 


I think that a lot of people should come to you for help and improve the overall quality of there game :)


Thx again!
 

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