Archadiem [New Alpha demo available]

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Found the title inappropriate?

  1. No, i lked.

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  2. Yes, change now! ( Suggest some in comments)

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  1. RocketKnight

    RocketKnight Broke with expansive taste Veteran

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    The plot is pretty cliché, it is a young man who decides to go searching for his girlfriend who disappeared under archaeological expedition.
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    The storyline is very weak, I know that but I will try rewarding gameplay.
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    Each scenario offers several unique and diverse interactions expanding the player's
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    I tried to make the HUD less invasive as possible, not to interfere with the gameplay.
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    [​IMG]Torch. [​IMG]Run. [​IMG]Muscle power. [​IMG]Bag.
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    You just need to explore the scenery and it certainly will
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  2. PheonixDeath1

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    Nice work..uhm you wouldn't happen to have  a Skype or something I wanted to know how you did that to your title screen where the text is different.

    And the story doesn't have to be cliche' unless you make it cliché just add your own flavor :D .
     
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    Yep, but I don't go very, I have profile on Deviantart (insert link in the post),
    most things made ​​using events. I promise the background-story is more interesting.
     
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    Looks nice, From your title, it would seem as though your story is somewhat sexual, is this the case? if so, its not allowed I dont think.

    Either way, those graphics re very nicely put together, good job so far.
     
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    This is unrelated, wanted to give this name because it's my project number 30 (Arabic numeral),
    most of them never go forward however very I want to finish this. It will probably be my last.
     
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  6. Clord

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    I suggest to rename the game to avoid confusion. Though it is your game.
     
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  7. RocketKnight

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    I'm not very good with names, have a suggestion? Thanks to everyone who commented.
     
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  8. Clord

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    Expedition to the Ancient Ruins.


    Ancient Ruins: Expedition.


    Ancient Ruins: Rescue Damsel in Distress.


    Etc.


    However you should try to come up with a proper story and base naming on that.


    If you use any of them just credit me for coming up with one.
     
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  9. C-C-C-Cashmere (old)

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    This game is really swell-looking. I'm glad this game has very little in the way of story, because it looks like it's in a different language so I won't be able to enjoy it that much anyway. Very nice lighting effects and HUD. It looks like you're using the engine for something other than turn-based battles which is always a good sign.

    I've got a few questions:

    • Is there combat? Or is it just puzzles in a dungeon, like Raiders of the Lost Ark?
    • Will there be puzzles? What kind of puzzles are they? The screenshots don't tell me that much about gameplay.
    • Will it be released in English as well? Or just your native language?
    Your project looks like it's going well, and I wish you all the best for meeting the deadline.
     
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    I came here expecting an hentai game, this also explains why there are *Dalph checks* 25 users who are reading this topic.

    Anyway, good luck with this, looks promising so far.

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    28 now, this shows how much that title can be deceiving.
     
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  11. RocketKnight

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    Progress with developing the game it will be transcribed into another language (English)*, there will be puzzles: push boxes, avoid spikes, crushing walls (ops! Better stop writing).

    *My English is very very awful.
    Thanks bro, i think.
     
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    I like the sound of that. I think I want to play this game now.
     
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    Do you like the way it sounds? Because I didn't.
     
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  14. Clord

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    There you go, now you have a proper game title. :)
     
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    Journey to the Centre of the Ancient Ruinous Dungeon xXx: Project Save Girlfriend or Die! Alpha Edition
     
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  16. Clord

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    In the dungeon we save the girl, in the dungeooooooooon.


    Yeah, please no.


    I'm looking forward to play this game.
     
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  17. RocketKnight

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     I recommend switching to a different font that better depict the roman numerals, maybe with an underline and an overline.
     
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    Alpha demo available now - Download
     
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