Awaken [DEMO v52416 released

[SoraNoYosuga]

I downloaded and played your demo a week or two ago, wrote up some feedback, and then forgot to post it.    So sorry if I bring up things you've already fixed or changed.


I gave your demo a shot, and I think it has potential.  Now, I was just downloading a bunch of random games so I didn't read your synopsis before starting, but I realize right away that you were copying Grimgar's intro.  Unfortunately the anime did it much better, and your intro was just a poor imitation (and Kise using lesbian as an insult was a major turn off).  I would really suggest trying to do your own thing for the intro.  Inspiration is fine, but trying to copy something is not.

Hey thank you for trying out the demo, school just started here in the Philippines. I rushed the demo a bit. And right now Im currently redoing the intro and quests. The quests seems too unefficient to me so Im going to redo it. In terms of my grammar English isnt my first language so maybe I could ask someone to proofread it for me..


The town and the Forest are going to be changed, because of the tile issues. Ill be fixing passability issues afterwards. I wont be replacing the interior because I only used the RTP for this and not Kaus', I'm going to keep the Ruins tho because someone in a community clarified that its 100% legit.


Thanks again.