Event Character Creation Contest Feedback

[JtheDuelist]

@TWings Yep, his name explains the life he lives. At least he got the immortality he wanted, just not the way he intended to get it.

 

[Starmage]

@Starmage : Elve and detective is an interesting concept. First time I've heard of something like that.

Thanks a lot! ^_^ Haha yeah, I just thought it was kinda funny and cool at the same time xDD

And I love your char concept too! ^_^He's got cool hair and is a sharp-shooter!! Another cool char fit for a cool sci-fi game! XD

 

[NeoFantasy]

@Starmage Thank you so much. I’m glad to hear you say that!!

@TWings I hope so too... Though, I wouldn’t trust myself to do that

 

[Nightblade50]

Everybody's commenting on how ruthless my character is
Just what I intended...heh heh
Joking

 

[NeoFantasy]

@Thomas Smith I like to think of him like a boss our characters have to fight. Though, I’d probably Tell Vice to stay out of his mind XD

 

[Nightblade50]

@NeoFantasy He is a fabulous major boss! XD

 

[Starmage]

@msazako - Wow!!! It's so awesome to see a mecha char here! That looks so badass!! Amazing custom sprite!! ^_^

 

[Rhino]

@hiddenone Thank you, it means a lot coming from you

@Haydeos She 'lives on the road' mostly, but I think she finds humans a bit easier to deal with, demons aren't so great at 'honest business'

@The Mighty Palm Oh, a forbidden friendship, that'd be so cute! I know I'd want to be friends with Adrian haha, I think Rosalia would be happy to lend some healing salve for after battle, just watch the holy water!

@TWings My friend said something similar, that she's too pretty for a demon... Well 'the devil comes as everything you've ever wished for', right? A lot of the time I just sigh when I see 'sexy girls' in games, but I guess I'm just as bad XD

Thank you to everyone for your lovely feedback. I have started work expanding the resources already, sv battler coming just as soon as I can figure out the perspective...

@Hatake-hime Oooh, I'm so glad you updated it! Wow wow, her chibi is gorgeous! Don't mind me as I stalk your dA, I might die from the cuteness!!

@msazako I second what Starmage said, your design is really unique and awesome!

@NeoFantasy Poor Vice... Scientifically, a clone wouldn't have the same personality anyway, as there's still an element of nurture and upbringing that shapes a person. With a history like that, she's never going to be a 'perfect copy', I hope she breaks away and get's a chance to live as herself

@Alkemical Holy heck that custom art is amazing!! Damian has such a fire in his eyes, I think the name really suits him!

@EagleFG Fonciel sounds like a really interesting character, I like that she has trouble adapting. She seems like one of those character that is a bit too awkward and mysterious at first, but ends up slipping into your heart as the story progresses.

@Elise727 A m-muscular female blacksmith? I didn't know I needed that until now.

@Vis_Mage Wow, I'd love to go and meet Ma'Vai. You painted a really vivid setting, I can just see a magical forest and the kind, mysterious man protecting it. With that design, it's like he's become a part of the nature as well. I can see him turning into one of those amazing trees with a face, watching over the wilderness. So is this a character you're using somewhere? (Don't mind me, I casually want to adopt him just to map out his home I hope that someone does pick him up though!)

 

[Starmage]

That looks Amazing!! @Rhino ! ^_^

 

[Nightblade50]

@msazako That is fabulous! I love how it's a robot, because everyone else's entries were a humanoid of some sort.

 

[W.M.K]

@W.M.K I can so see this character as the mentor of the protagonist, but I think it'd also be really cool to see him star in his own story. I don't think I could name any other games that star an elderly person as the main character so it'd be an interesting choice, plus there could be some really cool scenes where you play as a flashback to the Genokinan Wars... *Hack* Someone stop me before I write a whole concept...

@W.M.KYou just don't see very many protagonists in their golden years....or at least I don't. Quite refreshing.

I HAVE BEEN FLATTERED

 

[ArielSystem]

@Rhino

Well, He's still unstable to control his "Lava Power". Especially when he ate a "Chilli Fruit" that It'll activated his power automatically. In Warrion Heroes, There's some Items that can activate the states (User State and or Power Ups on Battle).

 

[Nightblade50]

@Isabella Ava Cool character!
Kazimir (my character) can just sneak up behind Chaos and grab her cloak off before she can attack him, then tear the cloak into pieces! XD

 

[Isabella Ava]

@Thomas Smith and i thought that your Kazimir character was invisible man. So a sneaky character eh?

 

[Nightblade50]

@Thomas Smith and i thought that your Kazimir character was invisible man. So a sneaky character eh?

Yes.

 

[Alkemical]

@Vis_Mage, really digging your character's overall design. It does portray an air of wizard/druid type of character, the hat is a really nice touch too.

 

[IguanaGuy]

Heya! I didn't see this discussion thread until Wednesday 18th so just opening up Thomas the LockMage for comments and critiques if anyone wants to.

https://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/inde...r-contest-mv-entries.93896/page-2#post-852476"

 

[Mrs_Allykat]

Due to @Misappi I learned about the R-F character parts. Those variations are simply adorable.

I'm late to the talking about it party too, @IguanaGuy, but better late than never. I'm not seeing the images, but your write up is great.

 

[IguanaGuy]

Due to @Misappi I learned about the R-F character parts. Those variations are simply adorable.

I'm late to the talking about it party too, @IguanaGuy, but better late than never. I'm not seeing the images, but your write up is great.

Thanks for the feedback - I double checked that my images were there (due to your response). They should be there now. Not sure if I am the only one who could see them before.

BTW - I like you steampunk cowboy entry as well. Were you a fan of FF6 when it first came out perchance. I see a lot of reference to MagiTech and Steampunk Era stuff.

 

[Starmage]

@eslabon - That Light Dragon transformation concept is pretty RAD!! ^_^