Event Character Creation Contest Feedback

[DarkHunter]

@Thomas Smith i like about your character. For vampire blood! For vampire blood! Real nightmate

@hiddenone I love invisible hero because i want to see him

@slimmmeiske2 Nice your character like witch??

@StrawberrySmiles I like your character because i want to look cute only

@yoshiyuki Nice your character. Did you design that?? I love it

@Hatake-hime I love your character because very cute your character!! I always look for cute only

@Rhino Wow cool!! Your character is so nice!

 

[yoshiyuki]

@DarkHunter
Thank you like them.
I have 2 characters. I don't know which design you want?

 

[DarkHunter]

@yoshiyuki i think....i like black hair....red of eyes.....I want to wear shirt (Colour white and black) and long pants. (Colour black)...just like i said ^^

 

[Rhino]

@slimmmeiske2 Thank you Oh! I hadn't noticed, but their colours do pair well together! They can create potions together, and @The Mighty Palm 's Adrian can test them out in battle~ An ultimate girl team

(Ahh, I'm already tempted to make some kind of non-canon mash up. There's so many unique characters in here, I bet it'd make a really wacky and fun story.... If only there were more hours in the day T-T)

@DarkHunter You've got a whole bunch of interesting characters in your story! Adventuring with a cat, sounds awesome

 

[yoshiyuki]

@yoshiyuki i think....i like black hair....red of eyes.....I want to wear shirt (Colour white and black) and long pants. (Colour black)...just like i said ^^

I guess what you like is the character "CONG-MIN" that I designed.
This is a simple design. In addition to the face and the sword are specially drawn, everything else is the original material in the "MV".

 

[Touchfuzzy]

Guys, the credit for the character in the submissions should be how YOU want to be credited. not the credit for the materials.

 

[DarkHunter]

@yoshiyuki Thank you sir!! Yes, i love sword only.. Just like you said as that

@Rhino Thank you! Yes, I love my cat!!

@Touchfuzzy Oo...Ok i will...I'm sorry

 

[Starmage]

@just1witness - Thank you so much for your feedback!! ^_^ You also made such a wonderful art and character yourself!! ^_^

Best of luck to us all for this contest!! XD Cant wait for the DLC pack with the winners busts and facesets!

 

[Nightblade50]

Best of luck to us all for this contest!! XD Cant wait for the DLC pack with the winners busts and facesets!

Maybe I'll get 5th place? lol

 

[Starmage]

OMG!! Being in the list of winners is a huge honor already as it is, Thomas xD

 

[starlight dream]

@starlight dream I love it His sprite has such a sad face too, awww! Tbt to when I studied classciv, but it kind of reminds me of Diogenes, the Greek philosopher who relinquished all his belongings and lived in a barrel. Maybe Calamito will be able to follow in his footsteps and survive off others kindness, and learn some life lessons along the way(??!!)

Thanks Rhino! I appreciate your feedback.
The barrel elf shares a similarity with a wise philosopher? Oh my, something must've gone wrong xD
Only the future knows if he'll learn from this or if his streak of misadventures goes on... Either way, character-submission-wise we can say he's the bottom of the barrel ^-^

edit:
I really like what you and @just1witness did by going through all the characters, I'm inspired to do the same, thanks!!

 

[Nightblade50]

Wow, other entries have a bunch of likes...despite my 12 likes, I might not get in the DLC
But we need an antagonist!

 

[starlight dream]

@Thomas Smith
I don't want to be your antagonist. Don't hurt me Your character can probably eat mine! GULP..

 

[Nightblade50]

@Thomas Smith
I don't want to be your antagonist. Don't hurt me Your character can probably eat mine! GULP..

Oh no, of course he won't...
Probably.

 

[Ryisunique]

I can't link to my entry, but just to be clear.

I was going for a human mimic. I couldn't think of another Mi name though.

 

[Alkemical]

I have no idea how to work this site's notifications and at this point I'm too embarrassed to ask.
So here's the replies to the quotes I missed:

@Alkemical Holy heck that custom art is amazing!! Damian has such a fire in his eyes, I think the name really suits him!

Thanks, the custom art is my girlfriend's work.
I picked the name because of how it is often used for evil individuals (The kid from The Omen, for example) and tried making a subversion of it. "The man makes the name, but the name doesn't define the man", something like that. As for his last name, I just really like Castlevania. I just had to find a way to make him completely unrelated from the world-famous clan of vampire hunters.

@Alkemical - I really love his story, and I couldn't help but think that it may end up a tragedy. x(

Spoiler: Weeeeeeeell.....

Long story short: His father was still alive, convinced Damian that the crown had turned on them now that there was no big wars to be fought, so knights became an expensive asset to maintain. Damian, being the Fighter with no points in "sense motive" of course believed him. Fast forward 3 months, Logan once again left Damian high and dry in the middle of defending the city they were in atm. Damian tried to follow his tracks but wound up getting busy trying to save the world from an arch-fiend and failing miserably.

EDIT:
Also, if the two categories will have a common poll, I feel that it probably will lean more towards only MV submissions, given how few there are in ACE in comparison. If there's gonna be two different polls for each, then everyone's chances of winning are higher, since we're not comparing one submission type with another that is more simple.

 

[starlight dream]

@Alkemical When I read the name, I thought it was a Castlevania reference, but the story was something else. And I was wondering if you selected the name by coincidence. Lol

By the way, you can set your alert preferences here:
https://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/index.php?account/alert-preferences

 

[Alkemical]

@Alkemical When I read the name, I thought it was a Castlevania reference, but the story was something else. And I was wondering if you selected the name by coincidence. Lol

Yeah, DM thought the same too. We actually didn't encounter any actual vampires during the campaign; a couple of liches, some vampire spawn, but no proper, full-blooded vampire. Which was extremely disappointing because I wound up having a Sun Blade, which is literally a ray of sunlight in the shape of a sword (the flaming one in the art).

Also, thanks for the help with the notifications btw

 

[MGbar]

Page 2 down, one more to go!

@Jarrod Will he meet Lilletha again?

@TheMutantSpaceDancer Heck yeah man, I LOVE beans. Bean bot is my spirit animal.

@Seacliff I hope someday she cam learn to forgive. Also, that she reunites with her daughter.

@Princess Bananabelle Poor Teddy, that sounds awful and sad, but at leats she makes the best of it!

@Haydeos Your character is very intriguing. I could see this story line being expanded a lot further. Very cool.

@BishoujoHelper I hope he's able to return to his parents someday. (If they are alive that is)

@SmashArt Ooooooh, I LOVE the art and the story, great job on this one. I can imagine so many possibilities for this story line. I hope you devlop this.

@MGbar How sad, I wonder if Zapharin would have made the same choice if he knew the outcome?

@AxelNinjaGamer I'm glad she could rescue her father.

@rue669 Guy sounds like a character with good depth, I bet his story would be inspiring.

@Rhino Very, very cool character! She kinda reminds me of Jeane from the suikoden series (her personality and job.) I love your art, you've done such a great job.

@Vincent Chu This is a very cool story. Kulvan seems like a stellar person, and it's cool that he later becomes and awesome dragon. I hope he finds close companionship with his new party and doesn't feel lonely anymore.

@msazako Yes! This one is super cool. It reminds me of Data from start trek a little (who btw was my favorite character in that series) Great art too! You did a great job with this.

@DarthMosher Wow, this guy sounds like a terrible person. I'm glad I don't know him in real life!

@IguanaGuy That's a pretty cool concept. The story really helps one to think about unconventional value. Very cool.

@Isabella Ava Chaos is another character I wouldn't want to meet in a adrk ally way. Very nice bust art btw, it has that x-men legends collectors card vibe.

@EmmaB Anthea sounds like a really nice person, like the kind of person who you would want to be your friend.

He cursed all the world for being a mortal and not live long enough to find another remedy that won't need any sacrifice. But he loved Xyanthia so much that if he have to sacrifice himself again and again for her to live, he will do so.
A beautiful proof of love, don't you think ?^^