Thanks for the suggestions, Soul.
I'll tweak those few lines of dialogue a bit. I also thought that Jinn's lines in the intro cutscene could be made cruder. I'll see what I can do there without dropping F-bombs in the first 5 minutes of the game.
Yeah, I suppose I could make Lorelei's "profession" a bit more obscure in the beginning. In regard to her trusting Holt was because he saved her life, even when she told him she's an assassin. She's the kind of person who is kind to those who help her, but anyone who lies to her, takes advantage of her, or betrays her, receive zero mercy and sympathy, and she won't even blink when gunning them down.
Yeah, most enemies are triggered on proximity basis, once you get within a few paces of them. Of course if it's a narrow corridor, they won't see you from around the corner, but they will the moment you step into their line of sight, providing you're not too far away (it's a bit like how Chrono Trigger handled its encounters).
The song that plays in the slum street where the store is at?