Comedy RPG Idea

[Ryudoga]

There's great ways to write cynical and satirical characters but the way you're talking is just making it irritating and I'd stop playing the game after that BGM remark and it happening. There's breaking a fourth wall and then there's driving a truck full of singing goose through it. Having the character in game act like it'd be someone playing the game would be immensly annoying and would get old very quick.

Also, is the bomb in the lake reference to something? It confused me more than anything.

The main character as a whole sounds very unlikeable and not in a good way. He sounds like someone I'd want to punch into face, not as someone I'd want to spend time playing as.

Also for the record, he sounds like a lamer, less awesome version of MISTER BIG T minus all the world destroying and reason for cynicsm and all the hatred for humanity. So that role has been played out already years ago, sorry.

Well that sounds fair enough, ill work on that, again ill repeat this was just my first idea, of course this game might be like any other out there but yet again i want to keep my originality, of course i cant make everyone like my game and well, i take every feedback i can get and turn it int osomething constructive, ill discuss all that with my writters.

Sorry, i dont know who mister big t is, never heard of it, no offense though.

 

[Tuomo L]

Sorry, i dont know who mister big t is, never heard of it, no offense though.

You're talking to him. 

 

[Ryudoga]

You're talking to him. 

OH, my bad D: