Cornered Cosmo's Art Dump

[Simon D. Aelsi]

I like your sideviews and front the best.  Those are better learning angles IMO.

 

[That Bread]

@IronCroc Thank ya! : D

Well my sideviews and fronts continue below in my face studies.

Here's a nice illustration of some TOTS characters I did, along with a.... uh guy.

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Next up is a little slip of two fronts and a 3/4 of some characters

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Lastly we have a hoge podge of characters, some familiar and others in some interesting face structures.

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Finally not a face study more of a charcol rub draw.

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[Simon D. Aelsi]

Alright.

The shading on your  teapot needs a bit more definition. Right now as it stands, the pear looks shinier than the teapot, but even so, the shapes are decent but the background blends in too well with the objects.

For example,  a bit more contrast in the teapot's spout would be good; notice how the background is darker next to the spout; Perhaps if you used your eraser to take more of the charcoal away you could have gotten a bit more contrast.

Unless the handle of that teapot is black, try to get in as many of the features as you can when you do drawings like these. Since you don't have the luxury of color, all your shading and highlights comes from your charcoal and (if I'm not mistaken) eraser.

Moving onto the tablecloth (Or is that a barrel?)  It looks like it's part of the fruit, and even the teapot.   I'd say you need a bit more definition there too.

I almost didn't see the ball sitting next to that teapot. That should pop more. Stand out.

Now, all of that being said, this style of drawing isn't easy to do, but once you master a few techniques your skill will go far.


Keep practicing; keep it up!

 

[That Bread]

@Iron Thank you so much for the feedback!

Here's another charcol drawing
 

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and a little chibi drawing I drew with photoshop

 

[That Bread]

another still life this time a lamp

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and a bust drawing

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[That Bread]

digital art attempt any advice would be fantastic! : D

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[Sharm]

It's very wobbly.  If you draw bigger and shrink down, it'll look a lot smoother.  Still, it shouldn't be that wobbly.  Check your brush settings, it looks like the spacing might be too high.  Also, try to do things in single, long strokes as much as possible.

 

[That Bread]

@Sharm thank you!

I tried doing some lines below

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[Sharm]

The lines look better.  Are you using a mouse?  If so, you should learn to use a pen tool, it'll be a lot easier to get the edges nice and clean.  Getting a smooth stroke out of a mouse is just not what they're built for.

 

[That Bread]

I am using a tablet, but the problem might be what tool I am using within the program. Right now I am using the chrome pencil which isnt the best for sharp turns, I'll experiment a bit with different tools to see what's better for me.

 

[Sharm]

Huh.  What art program are you using?  Some are better at tablets than others.

 

[That Bread]

I'm using Krita a freeware program.

 

[Sharm]

Okay.  *checks out chrome pencil*  Oh wow, no wonder your edges are unsteady.  It's a really interesting tool, but it's terrible for making cel shaded character art.  Try the gpen instead and turn on weighted smoothing in your tool options.

 

[That Bread]

Okay yeah I'll try out the gpen, but could you tell me where to find it. I cannot seem to locate it.

 

[Sharm]

6th line down on the right in the brushes palette or in the brush menu under brush engines - pixel about half way in.  It looks like a rapidograph pen, though I seriously doubt you've heard of those since people have been using computers for drafting for a very long time now.

Edit:  There are two, the exact names are Ink_gpen_10 and Ink_gpen_25

 

[That Bread]

Thank you!

Here's a recent sideview drawing! And a sketch.

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[That Bread]

I went ahead and redrew something

Before

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After(I plan on coloring it latter)

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[That Bread]

Digging through some old stuff picked out some favorites!

Here's a 3D cad model I made

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Old drawing of the old designs of Dubay and Clarence, boy I was pretty sketchy then. Even more than now...

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Some old charcol drawing of a mysterious character.

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This ones ancient, it was an attempt back in the day to draw chibis of the old tots cast.

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I'll be drawing something new eventually. I did say I would finish some bust portraits for two people, but I wasn't too happy with them at the time and  think I can do better.

 

[That Bread]

Soo I've become much more active on Deviant art, so I decided to let myself post all the goodies on here too! <3

Lets start with a bit of a 013 to 015 drawing!

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Then lets look at my attempts at drawing a rat female humanoid lady

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Undertale!!!!

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[That Bread]

New Digi Art!!! : D\

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Dubay Cartoon Drawing

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Clarence Cartoon Drawing

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