Announcement: I have a holiday now, but the sad thing is my teachers don't know what's the meaning of holiday and swamped the whole class with a huge amount of homework (And I am doing it right now too...) so forgive me if I can't make videos daily at the moment, but when I can make videos, I will make them when I get the chance!
As usual, if you have any questions, feel free to ask!
In the name of The Double! (if you play my game, you'll understand this phrase^^) You've finished the game (well, the first chapter actually). Honestly, I don't know the future of this game, let's say I'm gonna fix the grammar mistakes first, and re-release the game again, once the game's fully playable for everyone. The sequel will be developed.
In the meantime, I just completed my team project, and it's gonna be a one-shot game (yep! it's complete and it's now under the beta test for the grammar check now), and I hope you'll play my next game, I'll tell you when the next game is complete.
And, I'm just in a big dilemma, either I want to continue The Lost Greenlight, or make a new, one-shot epic 20-40 hours RPG game by myself. Creating an epic game like those professional JRPGs is one of my dreams!
Thanks for playing, Deathspark. Glad you enjoy the game.
In the name of The Double! (if you play my game, you'll understand this phrase^^) You've finished the game (well, the first chapter actually). Honestly, I don't know the future of this game, let's say I'm gonna fix the grammar mistakes first, and re-release the game again, once the game's fully playable for everyone. The sequel will be developed.
In the meantime, I just completed my team project, and it's gonna be a one-shot game (yep! it's complete and it's now under the beta test for the grammar check now), and I hope you'll play my next game, I'll tell you when the next game is complete.
And, I'm just in a big dilemma, either I want to continue The Lost Greenlight, or make a new, one-shot epic 20-40 hours RPG game by myself. Creating an epic game like those professional JRPGs is one of my dreams!
Thanks for playing, Deathspark. Glad you enjoy the game.
By the way, there's this extra stage I didn't finish, want me to finish it? I don't have to, but if you want me to I could. I don't really have a lot on my plate right now so I can keep chomping on the game.
And I still wanna know when's the sequel coming out... I'll be waiting... *Stares at you with my blanket covering me in a dark room*
As usual, if you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Btw, please look at my current signature and open "Another game-in development" section, I have the link to my current team project. Take a look if you want.
Btw, please look at my current signature and open "Another game-in development" section, I have the link to my current team project. Take a look if you want.
No problem, and I realized that was the old forums I used to be in (And I've left it due to a personal conflict) so yeah, if you want me to play it, anytime.
As usual, if you have any questions, feel free to ask!
School holidays are over for me, damn it!
I was so busy with work I didn't realize it was over, I had not enough time for myself, literally, shucks...
Hello deathspark, I have an at least 30 minute demo. I was wondering if you would be willing to play through it and shoot me some feedback.
Plus I did do all of the dialogue and tried to find all spelling mistakes. With your video feedback, it will help me immensely!
The genre is not horror centered. In this demo there shouldn't be anything horrific, actually the only "dark" map in town was accidentally removed.
Just to note, I tried my best to find all errors within. So if you find one, well thats why I'm asking you to playtest it. So I can see when and why an error might happen. There is a known bitmap error that happens, not too often. The last time I played through it which was prior to this release I did not encounter it. So it should be fine.
Just thought I should let you know about it!
Plus there is a wonky puzzle... so I'll leave the answer here... no it is solvable. I have solved it many times without any trouble.
Its a button puzzle, in which you have to press three buttons. It goes by column, on the wall there is a color press the button corresponding to the color down from it. If you get it wrong press them in the correct order until the gate opens.
Hello deathspark, I have an at least 30 minute demo. I was wondering if you would be willing to play through it and shoot me some feedback.
Plus I did do all of the dialogue and tried to find all spelling mistakes. With your video feedback, it will help me immensely!
The genre is not horror centered. In this demo there shouldn't be anything horrific, actually the only "dark" map in town was accidentally removed.
Just to note, I tried my best to find all errors within. So if you find one, well thats why I'm asking you to playtest it. So I can see when and why an error might happen. There is a known bitmap error that happens, not too often. The last time I played through it which was prior to this release I did not encounter it. So it should be fine.
Just thought I should let you know about it!
Plus there is a wonky puzzle... so I'll leave the answer here... no it is solvable. I have solved it many times without any trouble.
Its a button puzzle, in which you have to press three buttons. It goes by column, on the wall there is a color press the button corresponding to the color down from it. If you get it wrong press them in the correct order until the gate opens.
Yeah theres been alot of demos. Or at least some specially made ones for the team. So I try to order it by putting higher numbers or slap a Newest onto it or even name it the cut scene (ex: the factory) for my partner. TOTS is a pet name for the abbreviation of Tears of the Sky, sometimes I call the story Tatter TOTS.
I am probably going to put together a game based on the Suikoden series - hopefully you are familiar with the franchise. I will definitely request an LP - but it probably won't be for several months (*yawn*)
Yeah theres been alot of demos. Or at least some specially made ones for the team. So I try to order it by putting higher numbers or slap a Newest onto it or even name it the cut scene (ex: the factory) for my partner. TOTS is a pet name for the abbreviation of Tears of the Sky, sometimes I call the story Tatter TOTS.
I am probably going to put together a game based on the Suikoden series - hopefully you are familiar with the franchise. I will definitely request an LP - but it probably won't be for several months (*yawn*)
I never played Golden sun... I didn't even know it was a game.
The fixes included, addition of a lost map and refinement of a puzzle.
The back door has a transfer, but it... doesn't let you go through.
The save point is a work in progress. I've been busy with the intro
Expensive items? Check the Pub!
I have to add a price for the inn... woops. Its ten Zeal, the currency of the world.
Can't figure out what to do on the book thief? Go to the store odds and ends with Dubay in your party, I need to add more clarity!
As I said theres alot of grammar/spelling mistakes. I couldn't find them all though...
I can see what I need to add more clarity as to where Dainas house is. Yes its Daina.
Ok I see where you went wrong with the demo... when they talked about finding the person. you were supposed to go to the mayors manor first... thats why they discussed the most prominent building. After that you go to the pub... then the mountain, then the chapel, and then the cave. From there I hope its clear enough, I've played this so much and I know the town so well. It makes sense to me and thats entirely my fault.
I will add a block to the mountain before you meet Falk.
You should consider some battles... your going to have to fight a miniboss later on. With only two members in your party.
Oh the guy with the carrot? He told you to find him, it looks like you skipped over that. I'll leave a hint... check Clarences dads bed! You'll find something! After that speak to a creep in red at the pub.
The Questlog is a work in progress, I just recently found the BGM error. Plus the quests aren't fully if at all written. The music box does not work, ever since I added the music volume.
Alot of this is reliant on the text between the characters right now.
If its not clear beyond that point then
Your supposed to travel through the cove exit out by the waterfall on your left. Head left go up and go right. Then you should find a staircase up. Which leads to the top. From there the game will guide you.
Your the second person who doesn't like the double tap... so I'm going to get rid of it.
Thanks for playing so far, I appreciate the feedback so far. It will help me refine the game.
Yes this is a very early demo, it only goes to the end of chapter one. Which you are playing right now, this game was a book so I divide it by chapters.
Plus... this is my first game, ever. I just started, and with the help of others I am learning what people expect in a game, I did know you needed balance and guidance, but I do know the story well and sometimes I kind of drop the ball thinking it was clear enough. Thus the quest log... which I am working on.
I never played Golden sun... I didn't even know it was a game.
The fixes included, addition of a lost map and refinement of a puzzle.
The back door has a transfer, but it... doesn't let you go through.
The save point is a work in progress. I've been busy with the intro
Expensive items? Check the Pub!
I have to add a price for the inn... woops. Its ten Zeal, the currency of the world.
Can't figure out what to do on the book thief? Go to the store odds and ends with Dubay in your party, I need to add more clarity!
As I said theres alot of grammar/spelling mistakes. I couldn't find them all though...
I can see what I need to add more clarity as to where Dainas house is. Yes its Daina.
Ok I see where you went wrong with the demo... when they talked about finding the person. you were supposed to go to the mayors manor first... thats why they discussed the most prominent building. After that you go to the pub... then the mountain, then the chapel, and then the cave. From there I hope its clear enough, I've played this so much and I know the town so well. It makes sense to me and thats entirely my fault.
I will add a block to the mountain before you meet Falk.
You should consider some battles... your going to have to fight a miniboss later on. With only two members in your party.
Oh the guy with the carrot? He told you to find him, it looks like you skipped over that. I'll leave a hint... check Clarences dads bed! You'll find something! After that speak to a creep in red at the pub.
The Questlog is a work in progress, I just recently found the BGM error. Plus the quests aren't fully if at all written. The music box does not work, ever since I added the music volume.
Alot of this is reliant on the text between the characters right now.
If its not clear beyond that point then
Your supposed to travel through the cove exit out by the waterfall on your left. Head left go up and go right. Then you should find a staircase up. Which leads to the top. From there the game will guide you.
Your the second person who doesn't like the double tap... so I'm going to get rid of it.
Thanks for playing so far, I appreciate the feedback so far. It will help me refine the game.
Yes this is a very early demo, it only goes to the end of chapter one. Which you are playing right now, this game was a book so I divide it by chapters.
Plus... this is my first game, ever. I just started, and with the help of others I am learning what people expect in a game, I did know you needed balance and guidance, but I do know the story well and sometimes I kind of drop the ball thinking it was clear enough. Thus the quest log... which I am working on.
So, do you want me to continue on this, glitch infested version or allow you to fix them up so I can play the newer version?
You can take your time, don't worry, because...
ANNOUNCEMENT: I have an exam coming up next week, and the week after that, and, the week after that too... Oh, and another week... Oh god... I can only make videos after 24th May! So, in order to say sorry for my absence, after my exams, there will be a 2 week holiday, so I'll play a lot, but I have to study for my upcoming exam after this exam too so please understand! ><;
Yes, I will accept requests during this period, it's just I can't play them yet as my hands are full on the exam and this exam is quite hard for me too, so I need my utmost concentration! To be honest, I have an exam in two days, I'm doing one video here and making an announcement here for you guys. Sorry for being absent for approximately one month! Don't miss me! >_<;
Shoutout to ArchaicSpoon
I hear no response from you on Heretical Light, so I'm putting it on low priority for now.
If there is no response until 24th May, I shall remove all games on low priority.
To any Malaysians out there ( It's quite foreign to most of you, it's our way in this country X3 ):
You know it's our Mid Year Exam and if you go full ****** and don't study, sei lo your exam, we all know it. And during two weeks holiday, we still have SPM, if SPM die, we all know we're f******, university don't want us how arh? Want get scholarship also damn hard le... So understand la okay? Dahlah I busy like hell, my patience got limit you know? And if we suck, the bonus is our parents will of course bomb us la... If you pure science stream like me, you know la... Chemistry, okay okay la... Biology, wah **** man... Physics, not stable de... Then some of you, Add maths? Skip all question? Haiz, good luck la to everyone of you, science stream ke, or whatever stream, good luck! Don't just play Dota only ah!
As usual, if you have any questions, feel free to ask!
I plan on revamping the game, but I noticed that you got lost easily/confused. I don't know how you would take the next few parts... it would be nice to see although I may hear more complaints on Grammar/Spelling. I didn't do the mistakes on purpose, it turns out I need to learn how to use proper grammar as for spelling well I kind of got reliant on spell check. Worst habit ever.
I suppose you can wait to play it when the revamp is finished. Its going to be big... and have fixed grammar/spelling with the help of some of my writers. I don't know much or if at all about grammar, I know I'm a writer and I'm nineteen. I should know this by now right? No, its all thanks to what happened with the last class that tried to teach me... that was seven years ago. Teachers didn't teach me anything about it in highschool( believe it if you will I know my college english teacher was surprised.). I only explain this, because I feel like I owe an explanation... and I probably do.
If you want to know more about the projects revamp it can be seen in the development post.
I plan on revamping the game, but I noticed that you got lost easily/confused. I don't know how you would take the next few parts... it would be nice to see although I may hear more complaints on Grammar/Spelling. I didn't do the mistakes on purpose, it turns out I need to learn how to use proper grammar as for spelling well I kind of got reliant on spell check. Worst habit ever.
I suppose you can wait to play it when the revamp is finished. Its going to be big... and have fixed grammar/spelling with the help of some of my writers. I don't know much or if at all about grammar, I know I'm a writer and I'm nineteen. I should know this by now right? No, its all thanks to what happened with the last class that tried to teach me... that was seven years ago. Teachers didn't teach me anything about it in highschool( believe it if you will I know my college english teacher was surprised.). I only explain this, because I feel like I owe an explanation... and I probably do.
If you want to know more about the projects revamp it can be seen in the development post.
Fun fact: I am only sixteen ( My birthday is on 26th September, by right this year I am seventeen but my birthday has yet to arrive so yeah! ) and I managed to correct your mistakes...? Not to mention I am in a country where English isn't the main language? XD Well, not to insult you but whenever I look at someone's command of language, it describes the person. It's related to psychology or whatever you call it. I can see that it's almost like a halfway through work, my advice for people like you is to double check and frequently give a few checks from time to time to see if there are any flaws. The second method is also good, letting someone point out the mistake, and that is what I'm doing. Don't just let me do it, let other people do it too. It'll improve you and you'll have more quality in your works in the future. I always check my spelling and read a few times when I key in dialogues in my game. In addition, I let my little brother play it and I constantly read the text again and again even if it's boring just to be sure it's correct. Test playing multiple times don't make you look stupid, it only makes your game less stupid. ( Wow look at me lecture someone elder than me! ><; )
You're younger and you can see these mistakes better.... well as I said I had a little trouble with my English classes. So with that in mind I am going to improve my grammar this year.
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