Editing a Walking Sprite

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Resource Type: EDIT of walking sprite

Maker Format: MV or MZ

Art Style: RTP-ish

Description: For my game's character Saylor, I tried mishmashing free assets to match the concept art, then filled in blanks from there. There are two issues:

• In the middle rows, the leg closest to the camera looks like a chicken drumstick. I transplanted "tall sprite" legs onto her to achieve a lanky look, then added pixels to connect everything. I failed miserably. Also, the shorts' shading doesn't match other elements.
  
  
• She's wearing a semitransparent overshirt, but I struggled to depict this. I shortened a dress and made it 70% opacity, but it looks like a blob

I'd be grateful if someone cleaned up these issues. (See anything else that could be better? Have at it.)

Reference Images: See below. I also can provide a layered GIMP file.

Spoiler: Sulky Superficial Smokeshow Singer Super Sprite Sheet Spectacular

*To make it worth your time, I'm open to a small return favor (i.e. playtesting or proofreading).

Thanks!

 

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