Yo there @Verdelite. Spoiler 1. Characters: Who is your favourite/least favourite character? What do you like/dislike about them? Do they seem believable/consistent? The Captain is my favourite so far. He is such a troll and an unpredictable witty character, but can be serious, demanding and quite sadistic too sometimes. Cendril is an interesting character as well, he seems to talk to himself quite often but is very likeable. Overall I gotta say that you clearly put a lot of effort in character development and it's obvious, even the NPCs seem to be well developed so I have no major complaints about anyone. 2. Story: What are your thoughts on the plot progression? Were there any scenes in particular that you liked/disliked? If so, why? Is it engaging enough to make you want to continue playing? What are questions that the story poses and which you would like to see answered? Are there any parts that dragged on/felt rushed? Anything that felt illogical/inconsistent? The plot is engaging, I'm definitely looking forward to know more about Cendril's past and what the future holds in store for him, and if he will be able to reveal his true nature to everyone without serious consequences. Regarding the scenes. I think the dialogues in the camp with the Captain are my favourites, he is funny and his orders completely unexpected too. No major complaints about the plot quite frankly, it really is engaging. 3. Gameplay: What are your thoughts on the combat system? Is it annoying/fun/too easy/too hard/convoluted? Are the dungeons too long/short/just right? Were the puzzles easy/hard/frustrating/rewarding? What about the difficulty/number of enemy encounters? What about the difficulty of the boss battles? I like how you added various QTE features in the battles, it's something I like and makes the skill use way more interesting and challenging than a regular boring command. Using Russel's skills felt like playing Legend of Legaia or using Sabin from FFVI, which totally triggers good memories. I found the gameplay a bit grindy in some places, if you don't level up Cendril enough, you might end up having troubles, especially when he is alone against multiple enemies (dayum snakes!). Maybe you can make the regular monsters slightly weaker since at the beginning he is a bit on the weak side, but other than that it was fun overall. Bosses are ok, I was a bit underlevelled against the Chimera boss, to the point that I gained 3 levels after beating it, haha. Dungeons are fine as well and so is the mapping, it's difficult to map decently big areas but you managed to do it pretty well so kudos to you. 4. Writing: Did the dialogue feel natural/forced/awkward? Did you encounter any strangely worded sentences/grammar mistakes/spelling errors? If so, feel free to point them out to me! I'm not a native speaker, so your help would be much appreciated! I'm not really a native English speaker either, so spotting grammar mistakes isn't exactly my forte, but I didn't find anything weird in the dialogues. I think you are a good writer and you like to write a lot (probably more than me), I usually get bored in some rm games and skip the dialogues entirely but with your game this totally wasn't the case. 5. Bugs: Did you encounter any bugs? Please let me know and I'll try to get it fixed asap I got the same crash of the user above (Uncaught Error: Header is wrong) when going south from the camp, but it seems to happen very rarely and randomly too. There is also a bit of lag here and there (I guess due to the plug-ins and big maps?) but other than that, no problems or other bugs spotted. Everything was smooth and enjoyable. 6. Other: If there's anything at all you'd like to say, I'm happy to hear it! Thoughts, comments, criticism, .... anything is much appreciated <3 Good job on the loading screens and the custom art (busts, pictures and facesets with emotions), everything really is gorgeous and made your game look very professional too. I'm stuck after beating the Wraith boss, at the torches puzzle. I checked the Torn page and noticed the roman number on it (XIV) but can't figure out how to proceed so any help would be appreciated. Thanks in advance. I'm enjoying it so far. Well done!