- Jul 7, 2012
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I`ll have to check that.
Did you talk to all the characters in the outpost?Maybe you could include Jeeves' sunscreen in the story, lol.
The slimes didn't do any damage to me at all and they were gone in two hits. You could add some attack power and defense for them to make them a bit tougher.
The mapping was a bit off in the last part of the sewers, for example. It just didn't look right. And in the desert camp you can exit from any side although there's a specific path to take. Not sure if this is intentional. The maps in general are very mixed. Some are great already, some have barely any details at all. I guess it's more about what places are finalized or not than actual mapping skills, cause you have definately done some good mapping too.
I noticed that Trivia skill, but I never remember to use it. :/
I just did some more exploring. I went to witch forest outpost, but there wasn't anything interesting there. How long has Heir been living with Jeeves in that camp? It seems there was a flash forward in time, but it wasn't implied in the story, I think.
The town within walls was very interesting, but hard to navigate. In many instances when I went to one direction to exit the map, it put me to the new one in a completely different direction. Very hard to make sense of things.
And lol, I died when I tried to steal money from that old woman who ATE ME... O_O