The cutscene is pretty good. I like how you used the downed sprite and moved the characters around, though the writing had some mistakes.Hey everyone I just got RMMV a few days ago and I spent today working on a little cutscene.
Also the music shift was good, though I personally would have had calmer music in the beginning, before the actual fight started.
And the map is a bit... Messy. I'm guessing you're trying to make it seem like the ground is going uphill in a lot of places, but it just doesn't work well.
Oh and the light flash animation before the heavenly beam and fire attack thing, should probably be over one of the characters, and not the center of the screen.
Great first attempt though imo.