Game & Map Screenshots 3

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  1. JJK_42

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    @Mister Big T:

    It looks nice, only the table on the right has its chairs standing partially on lava. That looks a bit weird. Apart from that I can't come up with anything you did wrong :) Good job!
     
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    The lava is actually on another level and there's glass over on top as a part of a decoration and making the monsters feel more homely.
     
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    Thanx 4 reply, I´ll work on it.

    And thank you also very much 4 liking!

    I worked now the problem out with the bluffy character. He looks much better now. (You can find an example at my homepage and even download the character there. He is free to use, if you want. Just mention my Terms of Use...)

    Now I got another one to show:

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    Lina on Vacation in a fantasy town... ;) . Also just a basic scene picture. I don´t know how to make the bridge look better. That´s what I must fix somehow.

    The trees are my own Titelset. Maybe I´ll upload them on my RPG Baze that you can use them too. Just vote if you want them to have (joke) :D

    If you wanna use Lina, see my homepage.

    On this scenery I will add some butterflys and such things. Humans for sure.

    Lina is just a model 4 the picture because my ´on VaCaTion´ party is not finished in sprites now.
     
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    Rose wala leo Ice Knight Member

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    My screenshot!

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    o_O a ghost?!
     
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    That doesn't really look like a ghost. Make them somewhat transparent or give them a blueish tone or something.
     
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    Rose wala leo Ice Knight Member

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    In this game,this character was dead,and the player is shocked that how he is alive.
     
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    @RPG-Baze: What is up with your trees and sprite man? They look all stretched and the colors are a horrible mess. I can't make any sense out of them.
     
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  8. Rose wala leo

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    I like your screenshots rpg-baze!
     
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    @RPG-Blaze - you should use pixelated fire, the painted doesn't match at all, also if you want your character bigger why not resize it evenly make it wider as well as taller then it won't look so oddly stretched.

    @Sievnn - I'd do away with the glowy things, they're pointless.  also whats with the two stars floating around?
     
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  11. Sievnn

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    Its making the title screen look more realistic as for the star its the mouse pointer.
     
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    I'MZA BACK with 2 screenshots :)

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    I would advise people with umm... strong feelings to not play my game. Lots of animals die.

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    One of the main Captain's House in my game. All Captains have very nice homes (cause they're stinkin' rich)

    @Avvy

    Thank you for your kind words! I confess, I should of turned down the volume on the video clips before I saved the movie file, but a fly must of went into my mouth causing me to save it anyway without really watching it back. Oh well, it happens.

    @Rose

    In terms of horror, I'd say you over did the darkness. Horror is made using dark tints, but I don't think making areas completely pitch black is the way to go about it.

     Other than that, the lighting on some areas such the study room looks interesting. It shows that the book may be of significance to the storyline/plot.
     
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    Just noticed that the 2nd screenie topic ended..haha~

    Welp, here's another one from the GMD(for yesterday)  :)

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    And this is the city as a whole

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    The tall red tower in the center is a castle. This capital is divided into 8 districts and the 4 red towers are actually very wobbly elevators that make a clinkity clink noise when you ride them.

    :D Sounds safe doesn't it?

    And just made this one

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    @Sievnn : I don't like the backgrounds.
     
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    @Lustermx

    :/ i'm using khas light effects,they don't look good in dark tint screen.
     
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    Just testing out some new tiles I edited from Mack and the RTP

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    One of my title screen backgrounds, thoughts?? required feed back

    - Thoughts on the Effects (the stars)

    - Thoughts about the gloves?

    - Thoughts about the "Options" Choice? (allows you to adjust the volume)?

    - The title?

    - How the words are written or you prefer a different style?
     
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    @Sievnn - Here are my thoughts:

    The first screen, with your company information, needs to be cleaner.. that is, remove the stars from that first screen.

    With regards to the stars on all of them.. I would prefer that they move slower than they are.. maybe half the speed.. and maybe randomise the direction a little more.. or maybe change the direction randomly.

    Everything else seems fine though the top of the title appears to be getting cut off.. that might be just the video though.
     
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    @Lustermx
    - First screenshot is fine, I'd prefer it if the grass fade was a little more defined but it's not the worst I've seen. The chimney needs to move back half a tile. Not a fan of the black strips, just get rid of them.
    - Second screenshot needs some work. Shift click to get rid of the wooden edges on the inside and complete the railing going up. A barrel just cuts off where there would be a solid wall. Fill in the autotile, I don't see the point of what you've done when you're using a black background anyway. The ceiling beams don't add anything to the map and the length is pretty impossible, just remove them.
     
    @Azure
    Looks fine apart from the path, it needs major work, I'd reduce the opacity of the fog a little.
     
    @Zeraf
    You know that you don't have to use every single autotile right? Stick to one or two, three at a push.
     
    @Filius Rex
    Everything looks good, the text on the banners looks stretched vertically.
     
    @Sievnn

    Indrah, I think, pointed out everything that needed work in your status update and you've not changed a thing.You need to work on cleaning and simplifying everything. It's just a title screen, players will spend maybe 10 seconds looking at it, it doesn't need 100 different photoshop effects.
    - The stars are too big and too bright, don't serve any purpose and look really out of place. If you're going to include them then they need to be the focal point of a more subtle title screen, see Hirion's as an example.
    - Is the cursor just for the title screen or does it have use within the game? If it's the former then just scrap it.
    - Having an options menu is fine.
    - The title is a mess, none of the images relate to each other and they all have a different art style. It's like you've went to google image search and grabbed the first four pictures you like.
    - The text is difficult to read and the line spacing is all over the place. This is more of a background issue though.
     
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