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Zach, I think I just had a graphicgasm. If there are any mistakes in those maps, no one would notice them.  =)
 

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@zachfoss: Whoa man, nice maps! Though I did notice a few things in your first map.

What is exactly is the greyish object on the right side of your map? It's resolution looks different from the rest of the map. And I'm assuming this is a beach right, so that duck/goose/swan looks out of place. Also maybe it's just me but I think you have a little too much going on in the for shallow waters. I'd say to cut down on the corals and... what is that in the top right hand side of the map...?

The second map is flawless as far as I can tell!~ :D
 

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Yeah, the swan and butterfly don't belong on a beach.
 

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Keep the swan.


Oh yes and those maps look digitally painted. Nicely done.
 
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The edges of the map are cropped because of my laziness, but the map shows I'm not lazy otherwise :p

newtemple.png

I totally redid the temple.
 
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Thank you, highly appreciate with all the feedback and criticism :) That grey-ish thing is suppose to be a dead squid. Haha, I thought that was a pelican, but my bad.  You're right, butterflies don't belong in the beach, I should add like crabs instead. 
 

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@zachfoss: on the left side of the first map, one of the palm tree shadows overlaps another palm tree and I don't think it should. Very nice looking maps overall
 

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@zach
Lookin' great dude! I really like what you did with the cliffs there! They're a pain to edit, ain't they? I still use 'em though XD
@Rim
That's pretty trippy! I like it, especially the writing on the walls. It's comming along awesome :)
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Well, there's Cel's that you could use! But, there aren't many river autotiles that match Mack's stuff.
 
Anyway, here's one from me. This time, it's a forest! (Yay! Original! /blisteringsarcasm)

 
There aren't that many white wave lines, it's just 3 frames of the map put into one. Yay for animated parallaxing!
 

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Hi Luneth. I am not used to this style of tile, but I like how the map looks overall. =]
 

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@Shin: Nice menu, although some of those icons look familiar... The icon for the "Item" tab is from Dragon Quest 9 right, Perfect Panacea and the Equipment is a bolt of Evencloth right? Where'd you find those? :3
 

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I made my own icon set with nearly 21,000 icons in it. Pretty much every icon I could find, make, or have an idea to make and might have a use for one day.
 

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Damn, I bet that causes some serious database lag!
 

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You didn't really make any changes to Nicke's menu, except add options and information. :|


I think this topic is better for showing things we can critique you with. XD
 

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we can critique him on the icons he used and on the information that he showed on the menu... :)

btw, I just noticed, the camping icon used looks like a rice ball... for the load icon, maybe something that doesn't have a quill is better... because a quill symbolizes writing, and loading is like reading... :)
 
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Thank you ma'am! It's a custom set that I've been working on for a couple of months ^_^

@Shin

Wow, that's quite a few icons x_x But, I like the direction you're going!

I've got an in game screen for you guys!



I use SO much fog and tint screen XD (Sprites are not final)
 

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@Luneth I'm actually loving those trees! The fog and tint is not bad :)
 

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@Luneth thanks for the feedback! I think I'll keep it this time! Although I wish more people'd given me feedback. :/
 
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