Game & Map Screenshots 9

[huubz]

I think I'll try to redo the whole thing a bit and try to see if I can edit some tiles to get some kind of engine looking thing out there.

Sadly the tileset doesn't include the monitor facing any other way and I also have an interactable event behind the monitor (the panel), so it will have to do

Thanks again dudes and/or dudettes!

 

[nkuroo]

Hi again~
here the first floor of the apartment/idk what i want to called it
ps: inspired by an image that i found on google

Spoiler: 1st Floor

 

[Sharm]

Why are there two dining rooms? If it's meant to be an apartment complex with a front desk in the middle then you would need to have some privacy between the two apartments and the public area. If it's meant to be a whole floor public area then the two clocks don't work at all and it would have couches along the wall. I like the office area.

 

[Vandriette]

 

[cabfe]

@Akumai - I'd make the reflection at a lower opacity, but it's a good idea to have added a blur effect.
I think, however, that there is a lamp (just right of the furniture) that is reflected on the floor, but doesn't exist.
And to be nitpicky, the furniture itself cannot reflect its top... but I guess nobody will notice/care.
Also, I think that the light reflection would look better more diffused (blurred) and less visible on the bottom part.

 

[Celianna]

@Akumai @cabfe makes a good point; you cannot see the top of the furniture in the reflection. The reflection is nice looking, but you'll want to cut it off riiiight as the top of the furniture is showing, just erase it with a very soft brush so it'll blend in nicely. That said, it looks like a really nice map! Perhaps some wall lamps next to the doors? People would like to have light near an entrance/door.

 

[huubz]

New try at the ship engine room. Pretty happy with the result

 

[RionFish]

@huubz It definitely sells that engine room feel, but something about the rotating circle drum looks off perspective to me. I don't know what it is, perhaps the shape of the wall above it? Or maybe the shadows on it's top. I'm not certain, but somehow my brain is going all optical illusion on it and refusing to see it as coming out of the wall, instead thinking it's dropped from the ceiling. Otherwise extremely cool.

 

[Gonor]

New try at the ship engine room. Pretty happy with the result

This looks way better and much more like an actual engine room. I like.

 

[huubz]

@RionFish I totally see what you mean. I think I got it fixed now, just gotta add the fixes to the animation etc also. Your feedback is super helpful, so thanks again! (even though I'm so done with this map and would love nothing more than move on already )

 

[callmedan]

I just finished a ballroom. What do you think?
Oh, btw those candles are floating in the air (in case you want to ask why I placed them there )

 

[IAmJakeSauvage]

I just finished a ballroom. What do you think?
Oh, btw those candles are floating in the air (in case you want to ask why I placed them there )

I was about to comment on the candles - but that's cool! :3

 

[cabfe]

@callmedan - it looks... dark. Dismiss what I'm saying if it's intended that way, but usually a ballroom is where people entertain themselves. It's often luxurious and with bright colors.

 

[callmedan]

@IAmJakeSauvage Thanks! The flying candles in Harry Potter inspired me XD
@cabfe Yeah, I was about to make it darker XD Because it's in a evil castle

 

[Tuomo L]

Here's a room from the main hero's castle, a sorta storage room. The bottom left is empty because playing a tune on piano makes a secret staircase appear that leads to treasure room.

 

[Slimsy Platypus]

@huubz I'm loving your screenshots! Your engine room looks great, but I agree that there is a bit of a perspective issue with the spinning pieces in the center.

What does everyone think for these map options? I'm on the fence on these:

Spoiler: Option 1

Spoiler: Option 2

 

[ashikai]

@Slimsy Platypus I'm more partial to the top one... but if you have a map where players can unlock locations, you could always use the bottom option as places that the player can see but not travel to.

 

[Chaos Avian]

@Slimsy Platypus I'd definitely go for the first coloured version. Being a place of significance it grabs your attention quicker than the second image where it seems to blend into the background somewhat. It looks awesome, great work either way~

 

[RocketKnight]

@Slimsy Platypus Version 2 looks better.
Hi, everybody, i just remade one map:

First version:

Spoiler

 

[RionFish]

@Slimsy Platypus I prefer the second one, but I think that's because something about the color palette of the first one doesn't jive with me.

@RocketKnight I like both versions of your map, but for different reasons. They feel as though they're from two different genre'd games.