Game & Map Screenshots 9

[Nutty171]

@Tuomo L Oh, you get to name your partner? Cool! *She gets called Beans for the rest of the game* ... Oh...

 

[dsiver144]

Been trying to recolor the tileset to match with Fall theme. Is it okay? (I haven't recolor the sakura-like tree, I have no idea how to recolor it)

Spoiler: Screenshot

 

[cabfe]

@dsiver144 - I'm not sure if the grass itself turns yellow everywhere in autumn but usually, it's not that yellow. There are still traces of green where I live.
Sakura trees in autumn turn yellowish like other trees, don't worry about that.
However, I have a problem with your sprites/bust combo. I have no idea who is talking right now, as they don't match at all. Maybe it's just a WIP though.

 

[dsiver144]

@cabfe Thanks very much xD In my country, trees doesn't turn to any color. It's just green all time. I don't really know much about this.
And about the sprite/burst. I haven't draw a sprite for the burst. I just use a random sprite from my game lol.

 

[callmedan]

I made this scene because I was too bored.

 

[Sharm]

I think you should vary the color a bit. Autumn is more colorful than spring. Grass is green still but more yellowish brown than in the summer, pine, fir trees and juniper bushes don't change color at all (hence the name Evergreens), the non Evergreen trees and bushes will change different colors depending on the type ranging from a lemon yellow to a fire truck red. Cherry trees (Sakura), turn orange.

 

[dsiver144]

Wow, this will help me a lots. Thanks very much!
Update: Autumn tileset

 

[Tuomo L]

So I listened to all your feedback and changed the intro around

 

[Arcmagik]

Started working on the Prison Dungeon!

Spoiler: Irassian Prison Beginning

 

[Nutty171]

@Tuomo L The selection sound (when you move the selection) seems much louder than all the other music and sounds. And one more thing, if nobody in the city could defeat the witches, why does probably one of the better warriors (Edea) think that with help from some girl who just got out of training she can defeat the witches? If there's something in the plot later on that explains this, then that's fine, it just seems a little confusing here at the beginning.

@Arcmagik There's not much here, really... And what is here seems like it shouldn't be here. I don't see why a prison would have red carpets and banners all over the place, and also be as "sparkling" clean as it is... Plus, you're using both lamps and torches for lighting in the same room. That seems a bit odd...

 

[somenick]

Hmmm... I'm trying a different style, based on the RTP. Rather, recolors and reshades. Please tell me what you think about this cave, people.

Spoiler

 

[Arcmagik]

@Nutty171 Fair points. It is a prison/fortress. There is a reason that I put banners though because the Meluvetian King is very showy to the point of gaurdiness in some cases. So some of the Meluvetian stuff ends up looking overboard for that reason. As for the red carpet... You are right. I followed it off the original 2k3 design. Which I should know better by now. I will have to look into adding some dirt and cracks to the tileset

 

[fizzly]

Okay, so I'll post first screen from my game.

 

[Nutty171]

@somenick There are numerous disconnected textures here and a tile error or two.

Spoiler: errors

I've highlighted in the orange boxes all of your disconnected textures. Disconnected textures never look good. In red there's an autotile error, and the thing marked in the yellow box has pixels of different sizes, which are ugly. Also I noticed that the grayish rock formations' textures seem blurry. Am I sounding rude? I don't mean to be; art is really hard to do. It's just that disconnected textures are my worst nightmare.

@fizzly You have a few tile errors in your map too:

Spoiler: errors

Nothing too big, you just need to fix up the edges on those tree tiles, then the map will be really good!

 

[fizzly]

@Nutty171 Yes, right, still need some polishing. Thanks for comment.

 

[Tuomo L]

@Tuomo L The selection sound (when you move the selection) seems much louder than all the other music and sounds. And one more thing, if nobody in the city could defeat the witches, why does probably one of the better warriors (Edea) think that with help from some girl who just got out of training she can defeat the witches? If there's something in the plot later on that explains this, then that's fine, it just seems a little confusing here at the beginning.

Yeah, it actually wasn't (every voice played at 70%) but I ran it through a normalization after recording it.

Edea actually has a personal grudge towards the main villainess, she doesn't mind whoever can help her get that. She reveals the reason and bonds together with Gracie a bit when opening up to her own reasons later.

Spoiler

If you're wondering why she didn't go try stop the witches earlier, she actually wasn't there. She is not native to the city and it's revealed that she tracked the villainess to here after she caused epidemic among the people of Edea.

The people of Edea were test subjects with the epidemic that was later on used to take over the castle and its protectors.

 

[somenick]

@Nutty171 OK. Thanks for pointing these out.

Not sure I can do much improvements, though.

Is this screenshot better or worse than the cave one?

https://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/index.php?attachments/sshot55-png.68616/

 

[Nutty171]

@somenick The disconnected textures aren't as bad on this one, but there's a huge open space, I'd recommend condensing the map a little.

 

[M.I.A.]

@fizzly Nice map! I hope you don't mind my asking, but where did you get that "fallen palm" leaf and Starfish? If it's ok to share, of course.

 

[fizzly]

@fizzly Nice map! I hope you don't mind my asking, but where did you get that "fallen palm" leaf and Starfish? If it's ok to share, of course.

Draw it myself, could't find any so it was necessary ^^ Thanks for asking!
Starfish is from some icon found in internet, but don't remember where I found it.