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Just a short project thing I'm working on this week.
I just love it! :3
@quigon: very good screen! I just suggest you to make fire lighter.
Just a short project thing I'm working on this week.
I agree with you on the log under the tree, and the sand. I think when I made the garden I didn't think of using the path tile for the garden, for whatever reason. But later on I even made a square thinking "Huh, this looks better" and just got sidetracked. Speaking of sidetracked, I added virtually no shadows whatsoever. It completely escaped me. I'll look into the log, it wasn't resized. I like the trees, personal preference, so they stay. And the grass going around the house was a failed experiment that might be scrapped, not sure. The bridge bit is just due to Photoshop, it's transparency, and that will have no negative effect.Couple of things... That area with the sand and the wood all around it really stands out in a not so good way. You might want to think about making it the same as the path or a darker color because it's calling too much attention right now. There's a white spot behind the bridge on the right side that probably shouldn't be there. The middle where the guy is standing seems kinda blurred for whatever reason or perhaps its the screenshot? I dunno. The logs under the trees on the left side need a shadow cast on them as they look really strange without one. You're also missing a shadow where the porch is in the middle of the house. There's an overhang above but no shadow right underneath. The upper left side is empty... there's a hole where I can see the transparent pattern of photoshop. The log in the water at the most bottom on the left has either too much contrast or has been resized too much. It looks too grainy. I really like the placement of the trees and path but I'm not sure what's going on with the tall grass. It's kinda going around the house randomly. You might also want to stick to one tree color because the bright trees there are a bit too bright in comparison. Hope that helps ya out.