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[Mimironi]

"You know what happens when you fight"

*bud cowering in fear*

Ah, yes. This will be a nice reoccurring situation.

 

[Paladin-Cleric of Awesome]

Leave Olaf alone. It wasn't done on purpose and can't you see he's devastated.

Oh dear. Things get better right.

 

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17. Vengeance

After Bud was calmed down and everyone else went to sleep, Olaf contemplates what he would do if he runs into that monster again.

 

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I  feel a battle coming on 

 

[Euphoria]

This story is awesome

 

[Paladin-Cleric of Awesome]

Uh oh. No Olaf. Don't do anything stupid. Think of Gabrielle! (Sorry, still shipping them)

 

[Kes]

Poor Olaf.  Now it's "edge of the seat" time while we wait to find out what happens next.

 

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The next theme is Love   :   I think there is going to be a moment where Olaf's and Gabrielle's feelings for each other come to light as she try's to convince him not to return to battle the mud monster. 

 

[Paladin-Cleric of Awesome]

Lol. Or we're left crying because the author has a completely different plan. Lol.

Still waiting!

 

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I did not expect Olaf and Gabrielle to be such a favored pairing!  When I started this I didn't think I'd be including any romance, but it seems that the characters have other ideas in mind.    I guess we'll have to see what happens down the line! 

18. Love

A new day reveals a new memorial and renewed friendships.  It's time to get back to the journey!

 

[Kes]

Ah, but maybe they were washed downstream and everyone will meet up again?

 

[Paladin-Cleric of Awesome]

Yes, yes they will... They have to. I like kel and Tina!

Lovely interpretation of love. It really fit.

(I'm not crying... Really I'm not.)

 

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 I really didn't expect this story to be as gripping or emotional as it is. Poor Bud! He lost his mother figure Tina and his closest companion Snowball in one foul swoop. Lets hope all this emotional turmoil doesn't cause him to drift to the dark side!

Need next episode please.    

 

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Ksjp17 & Paladin:  Guys, stop reading my mind!  Otherwise I'll have to start wearing tinfoil to keep you out! 

KingDanner:  I'm glad you find the story gripping!  I wasn't sure if this style would allow for a very emotional story, but it seems to be working.

Off to draw tears now, be back in a few hours!

 

[Paladin-Cleric of Awesome]

Ooooooh, tinfoil hats! Awesome. I love those!

Those only work for keeping us from reading your thoughts. We can still implant thoughts in there. Lol.

Seriously though, looking forward to more, whatever it may be.

 

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19. Tears

They're alive!  They're not in the best shape, but at least they're not dead!

I was thinking of being very cruel and not revealing this for a while, but I wanted to draw them again, so here you go!

 

[Kes]

Yayy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Paladin-Cleric of Awesome]

Tina no! Poor Tina.

And yay for multiskilled kel... Though as I'm not sure what exactly he is he could be a medic type character.

And YAY they're alive!!!

 

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I new they'd be alive  and I actually did think you was gunna leave us hanging a little longer there  . 

"Whats that Snowball? Tina & Kel are alive? Lead us too them"! (My prediction) 

 

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Paladin:  Kel's not a medic, but can follow directions.  Tina told Kel what to do.

20. My Inspiration

So I thought I'd do something a little different for this one.  People seem to like these characters (which means I'm doing something right   ), but when I came up with them they were quite different.  So here's a rough idea of what the adventurers looked like when I first thought of them:

There was only one of the brothers and he didn't have a hat, Tina was meeker and had long hair, Kel had been blown up recently, Olaf had eyes, Gabrielle's hairstyle was different, and Bud was a tough guy with a mohawk.

Obviously they've gone through a lot of changes, but without these first ideas our adventurers wouldn't exist.