Horror/Mystery Graphic Novel Game - Early Stages

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Like the title descripts I'm working on a non-commercial Horror/Mystery Graphic Novel using RPG Maker VX Ace oriented for teens+.


MIRACULO ISLAND

If I had to make a brief synopsis:

"You play as Nicholas, a guy who had an accident two years ago and lost part of his memory. Because of this you have no friends, no clear objective in life and have gotten behind in what academic matters refers.

The school has deemed necessary (mandatory) for you to attend an eight days seminar in an island located somewhere in the Atlantic Ocean.

Here you will meet five other 'rehabilities' who will take part of many activities you will have to perform. But strange things begin to happen...

What you thought it would be eight boring days will become your worst nightmare.

Is the island haunted? Is someone else out there besides us? Is there a reason we're here? So many questions to be answered.

Depends on you and your mates to survive in this mysterious place."

I'm highly inspirired by Infinity Games so it will have some comedy/emotive/romance/scientific theme in it too. It'll have spicy humor/conversation but no eroge so rest assure. It'll contain some mini-games too (to make use of RPG Maker capabilities while we are at it).

It'll start slow and as the days go by the events will become more violent and horrific. So don't expect scare jumps the moment you step in the game. You gotta build up the atmosphere first.

I have been working on the story for a few months now and I could say the main flow-chart is done.

Now I'm writing the script (dialog, narration, event flow...) and brushing out background side stories.

Being an interactive story the strong point of this game is the story-telling and character immersion in this world so what I'm desperately looking for at the moment is:

  • Character Portrait Artist: I give you the description of every character with a small reference, then I leave the work up to you. Surprise me. I'm looking for anime style characters. Bust. OPEN. (1 applicant.)

  • Spriter: In order to reduce text description I'll need plenty of sprites (sleep, swimming, kneeling, hands up...). Mack edits. OPEN. (1 applicant).

  • Concept artist: Images play an important role in graphic novels. I don't expect Picasso to draw the pictures. I just want a simple, unique design that will transmit the feelings/idea to the lector/player. You'll mostly be drawing horror-gore scenes. Simple backgrounds, no worries. OPEN. (1 applicant)

  • Writting checker: English is not my native language so I'm not that confident in my skills. However I think I have made a good job until now given that I have plenty of experience playing eroges, visual novels and other kind of games. Not a priority though. I won't give you the entire script but ask you how should I write a paragraph or an idea. FULL. (1 applicant)

  • Composer: Not a priority but that'd be nice! Prepare themes for emotive scenes, horror scenes, funny scenes. OPEN. (1 applicant)


What I expect from the members of the project?

They have to be friendly, reliable, trustworthy, be truly interested in the story and development of the game from beginning to end; and of course, not expecting any money out of this as I'm not either.

By being part of the project you'll have plenty of information about the story of the game so I expect you to not be a douche and go around stealing/spoiling it. You can apport your ideas to the game too (that's the idea after all, working as a team to achieve something big). However I make the final decisions.

An interest in anime/JRPGs is a plus :)

I want a small but workable team.

What can I offer you in return?

A hug?

If you play Pokemon X/Y I can give you some good Pokemon >.<

I can also give you ideas for your project... I'm pretty good at that.

Other than that I dunno =(

Of course, you will be properly credited. You'll be in a team, after all.

Additional Info:

Characters (7):

(brief description)

- Nicholas: the protagonist. 17 years old, easy going guy that spends a lot of time playing video-games, watching movies and reading manga in his free time (which is plenty).

- Sebastian: 14 years old genius boy with 167 IQ points. Freak socially awkward guy.

- Franco: 17 years old known as a troublemaker (aka douche). Adventurer guy.

- Amber: 16 years old antipatic girl. She doesn't like people.

- Cynthia: 15 years old rich innocent girl. Daughter of the reowned ABON Corporation president.

- Janet: 17 years old energetic girl. Very positive and friendly.

- Valerie: The person in charge of the seminar. She decides the chores the students will have to perform. Luckily, she is very forgiving and caring.

Screenshots:

I don't have much mapped by now. But the events will make use of a map multiple times so that allows me to refine every one of them. WIP.

Here is a recent video I made (9/13/14) with some maps with mild effects:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ie44iIKovU

Sebastian Io-oI



They're not final of course...

Like I said, this game is on early stages but I plan on going till the end with it. I so want to write this story :D

If you're interested and you think you can fulfill a role leave a message here or PM me if you're shy xD

We use Skype and Trello.

Forgive me if the post does not have the right presentation but what's important here is the game, isn't it? :p

I'll edit if anything.

Thanks for reading!
 
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hello there ^_^ my name is robert , and i am an experianced composer and electronic musician in the area of video game soundtracking and composing , i have worked on a multitude of various video games styling from side scrollers to rpgs (like on this website for example ) , platformers , over head views and in general most different types of media , i have a soundcloud with some of my older work , but i have banks of newer work on all area of ambience and of normal types of soundtrack . i have a variety of skills and types of composing , i am reliable and fast working , and can manufacture a complete soundtrack for a game in under a few hours , i work for free so relax on that thought , please PM if you are interested or want my assistance , best regards - robert . ps 

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and this is my soundcloud -  https://soundcloud.com/robertfluffy-kilpatrick
 

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Hi there, wow im surprised i found this
Though a bit randomly, since i was googling Graphic novel horror games. Im researching gameplay of different game types of the horro genre

I'm interested in the Character Portrait Artist position


I do have a few questions though, such as time expectations (as in when do you need things for)
Well anyway, PM me if you'd like to work together :3

Have a good day
 
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Thank you for your interest.

I'm desperitely looking for a spriter. Anyone out there interested in this kind of games?

Still working on the script.This takes sooo long ._. ... but having fun while doing it :D
 

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Upgrade: This is taking more than planned! Loads of things to do! But not giving up till finished > :) !

Added new screenshots :3
 

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Hey!! What's up? 

This project sounds really, really interesting! I would love to join it!

Maybe as an character portrait artist or concept artist...?

So, I guess you wanna see my gallery?

Uhhh...Keep in mind that I'll do my best. What you'll see in that gallery may not seem fitting for an horror themed game, but I really want to try new things. Plus, I'm extra help, right?

http://dawn-mayer.deviantart.com/gallery/
 

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Hey!! What's up? 

This project sounds really, really interesting! I would love to join it!

Maybe as an character portrait artist or concept artist...?

So, I guess you wanna see my gallery?

Uhhh...Keep in mind that I'll do my best. What you'll see in that gallery may not seem fitting for an horror themed game, but I really want to try new things. Plus, I'm extra help, right?

http://dawn-mayer.deviantart.com/gallery/
Yo!

Don't worry, I value interest over skill as I'm just a -motivated- beginner too. We're all learning here :)

And indeed, the project looks promising. I'm really good at planning/plotting. My weak point would be execution :p

I think you can fit the concept artist role if that's okay with you. I need assistance in that xD

Ideally, I'd love to keep a consistent art style all through the game but we'll see.

If you want more information add me to Skype: 'shinykyuukon'.
 
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Yo!

Don't worry, I value interest over skill as I'm just a -motivated- beginner too. We're all learning here :)

And indeed, the project looks promising. I'm really good at planning/plotting. My weak point would be execution :p

I think you can fit the concept artist role if that's okay with you. I need assistance in that xD

Ideally, I'd love to keep a consistent art style all through the game but we'll see.

If you want more information add me to Skype: 'shinykyuukon'.
Yey! I'll do my best. You tell me and I'll do it. 

If you want, I may start right now! (god, save me from my boredom).

I totally understand what you mean with execution being your weakest point...I still remember when I tried to create that game (you know)...Ahhh, "good" times. 

Ugh, I don't have skype (I lack a camera, you see...) can we talk here? Or, maybe...We'll see :)
 

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Yey! I'll do my best. You tell me and I'll do it. 

If you want, I may start right now! (god, save me from my boredom).

I totally understand what you mean with execution being your weakest point...I still remember when I tried to create that game (you know)...Ahhh, "good" times. 

Ugh, I don't have skype (I lack a camera, you see...) can we talk here? Or, maybe...We'll see :)
No need for cam/mic. We just use the live chat.

Sent you a PM. Let's not spam here >.<!
 
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Hi,I'm Ultim1337Gamer,

I'm here so I can offer you my service as a spell checker.Even if English is not my native language,I'm really experienced with it.If

you agree,PM me with the text you want me to spell check.

Thank You.
 

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Hi,I'm Ultim1337Gamer,

I'm here so I can offer you my service as a spell checker.Even if English is not my native language,I'm really experienced with it.If

you agree,PM me with the text you want me to spell check.

Thank You.
Hi there! Thank you for your interest. But, fortunately, we already have a spell checker in our team and she seems to be doing fine alone so...

Anyway, if anything happens and I require your skills I'll PM you later :)

Any spriter out there? :3 T.T
 
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Bump! Little update: I'm finishing up the heavy parallaxed mapping stuff. Still gotta work on the system. Hopefully soon I can show some of the maps on video (with transitions and all) :)

But that said... a spriter would really REALLY save me tons of times. Again, you will be editing existing sprites I provide to you so don't worry about difficulty!

Months ago I thought I'd have a DEMO soon. I was sooo wrong D; Okay, I've been a little bit lazy, maybe... but I like how this all is coming along :)
 
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Gonna just throw it out there that your characters sound very underdeveloped and weak. You may want to work on that.
 

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Gonna just throw it out there that your characters sound very underdeveloped and weak. You may want to work on that.
Maybe because of the lazy description with no pictures xD!

I assure you they all serve an impotant role in the story and are well defined and related (after tons of visual novels played I think I know how to handle this whole character development stuff; my weak point would be graphics. There I can't defend myself :( ).

But thanks for stopping by :D

Edit: Got spriter! Welcome 'hiddenone' :D !
 
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