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[Abdulla Al-Farsi]

Hi,

I need someone to fix this text for me, please.



Bleeding Knife

It’s a classic horror game based on exploration, puzzles and story-telling. You need to find items and choose the right choices to be in the right path of the game.


Story:

Obaid is a homeless man who has been arrested and sent to an island prison. One day, something terrible happened and someone unlocked Obaid’s cell. After several minutes, Obaid realized that the island is not safe at all. He surrounded by many dead bodies and he needs to find a way to escape. During his adventure, he found some survivors but most of them didn’t make it. Also, he found himself thirst to know the mysterious reason behind this tragedy. He did all his best to enter The Duke’s Castle for seeking the truth. How will he enter the Duke’s Castle? Who will help him? What is that malicious entity? And who’s responsible about this mysterious tragedy?

 

[Rinobi]

Bleeding Knife

An RPG style horror game based around exploration and puzzle solving.

Obaid, a homeless man imprisoned on an island, suddenly finds himself surrounded by the corpses of the prison staff and inmates. In order to escape the prison, Obaid and the remaining survivors must unravel the mystery behind The Bleeding Knife.

(( Or something like that. ))

 

[SimProse]

I took a very quick pass at this, just for fun:

Bleeding Knife: A classic blend of puzzles, exploration and intriguing story-telling. Finding items and making crucial choices are essential for success on this adventure.

Story: Obaid is homeless, and is soon condemned to an island prison. The fates interceded however, and one day he found his cell mysteriously unlocked. His worst fears realized, he is surrounded by death and horror as he discovered the long-deceased bodies of former 'survivors'. His curiosity grew about the secrets of the island and the true reason behind these tragic events. Only entering the Duke's castle would uncover the real culprit behind Obaid's inexplicable odyssey of darkness and murder.

 

[Abdulla Al-Farsi]

@Rinobi Thank you very much for your help, but you made it too short.

@SimProse I hope you had some fun during your writing I like what you write it for me. I really appreciate that.

Thank you very much, both of you, but I need to choose one only.