IDEA DUMP; My kind of flaw

[Clockwarkgate]

I like to share all the story concepts that I have created...

(1) A story of a 18yr old guy who has lost his memory after meeting this 14yr old girl. The girl has no reflection infront of the mirror. The two of them were meet by fate to protect the city they live in. Because they were chosen by the world of reflection.

(2) In the year 5xxx, citizens live in a huge space dome but the life style there are like the older days. A 58yr old inventor accidentally break a seal in a city plate, where the evil shadows sleep in deep slumber. At the site, he meet a 9yr old vampire girl. The inventor was pact from her until they seal the evil shadows once again.

(3) An adventurous story about the 22yrs old seafarer, 12yr old princess, and 5 other people. In search for a wonderful treasure.

(4) Story of a 19yr old male student babysitting on his 9yr old stepsister.

...notice a pattern? >///u///>

 

[Capitán]

Older men and underaged girls...

I have a name for them

Jailbait the Tetralogy.

 

[Kyuukon]

If they were older women and under-aged boys, would they be called the same? Hmmm...

 

[Capitán]

Yep, I don't discriminate.

 

[Clockwarkgate]

Lolis! x3

 

[MaikeruKeay]

as the first person to dump an actual story idea...

(btw the start is kind of copied from game of thrones, sorry)

between two worlds (one dark and filled with ark creatures and one a big rich kingdom) there is a barrier. along the barrier there are four guardians protecting the kingdom from darkness however it has been hundreds of years since the last attack and now there are just a few novice warriors/mages there. pretty much s*** goes down and next thing u know they are venturing into the dark place stopping a bad guy... simple, done, but cool

 

[Engr. Adiktuzmiko]

Ooooh, all about older male with a younger female.


PS: what do you call a man who is attracted to older women btw? I'm just curious

 

[Chaos Avian]

Lolicon for days! And that's a good question, myself being attracted to older women...

Anyways, one idea dump of mine is a group of students mess around with grimoires and summoning rituals and by accidentally sacrificing a part of themselves summon the 72 demons from the Lesser Key of Solomon onto their unsuspecting city. To repent their sins the 4 Archangels give the students a means to combat and cast away the demons they summoned.

 

[ArcaneEli]

Why are all the girls so young? They are all 14 and under while the males are like 18+...

Personally not a fan of and dislike lolis.

(2) was my favorite one but you only gave us a vague description of the vague plot of vaguely what the story is gonna be.

 

[Kes]

Can I just remind people that we have minors on this site, so how you discuss this particular aspect should keep that in mind.

Thanks.

 

[sabao]

Art/fiction/video games explore a lot of matters most cultures might consider taboo: murder, drugs-all that stuff. I think it's cool that we have them. Most good games with content of this nature explore the subject matter thoroughly, illustrating the appeal, and dangers of the subject matter, as well as its possible rammifications on society at large.

The suggested ideas of the OP imply lolicon is the primary idea and then a completely unrelated plot is tacked on top of it. No attempts to go beyond the idea of fetishizing little girls are presented, but then again each idea is only three to four sentences long. A serviceable plot may still come out of any of these, but I personally find throwing a fetish in for the sake of it is self indulgent at best and downright pornographic at worst if it's going to be given as much emphasis as it does.

 

[Celianna]

General discussion is not your idea dump. There are appropriate threads for actual plot feedback, use those.