I'll give you credit for working on a project and putting it out there, that's the hardest (and arguably) the scariest part of making a game, but your three biggest surface-level issues here are:
1. The Presentation & Audience:
Deciding on where to put your game is a bit of a difficult task because quite often you have to be able to read the room' on a community to try and figure out if your game's ideals themselves would be accepted there before throwing it out to the wolves and asking for feedback.
I only just signed up today, but from what I've seen while lurking around, I don't think a meme game full of what is likely in-jokes between friends is going to do too well outside your group of friends, let alone a community of developers.
2. The Mapping & Themes:
This kind of speaks for itself, your maps are full of broken eclectic pathways, tiles in certain maps look like they were chosen at random; Take the lava map, for instance, it's covered in scorched tiles with a river of lava, makes sense, it's a Volcanic/Infernal theme... But then you're using carpet? If there's a joke or a reason for this, I'd definitely want that portrayed because to me it screams the person who made the map doesn't know how to stick to a theme or aren't sure how to make a coherent map. If the choice of using carpet was for a one-off gag, that's a pretty weak design decision to choose a floor tile on.
3. Rebel without a Cause:
Now look, I love an underdog, hell I've been the underdog at several points in my life and there's no better feeling than coming out on top of whatever it is that's keeping you down, but... The main menu song is just a slowed-down version of what I think is a song by The Living Tombstone, you've got "**** Your Feelings" & "**** Copyright" plastered on there too and quite frankly it feels like you're just lashing out pointlessly.
"Look at how much of a rebel I am, using an FNAF song without the owner's permission", "Look at how cool I am because I don't give a **** about your feelings!", "I swear every other sentence because that's the cool thing to do!"
I don't really know much about you personally, but this kind of attitude really screams rebellious teens to me and I get it, I've been there myself; I've been a pretty strong believer in "**** the System" since the system failed my family one incident after another, but yoinking some guys song and shouting "**** copyright!" isn't ****ing the system, it's ****ing other creatives and yourself because you're inherently installing a lack of respect against yourself in other people.
I get this has been a bit of a lengthy response and it's more about you and me, rather than your game, but this is just how the whole thing comes off to me.
You asked for feedback, here it is.
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