Legend of Astral

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Game Synopsis:

Twenty years before the start of the game was a great catastrophe called the Astral Fall. It wiped out nearly ninety percent of the human populations. While it nearly wiped out the human race it turned it's wildlife into monsters. After the Astral Fall some of the remaining human population were devoured by the monsters. Soon the humans built a town with a high enough wall to keep the monsters at bay. They soon started to expand the area forming the city of Cindel. Cindel then became the government city of the world. They then created an army to help protect the remaining human survivors of the world. At the start of the game Cindel manage to bring most of the technology back from the past. But they also regulated the flow of all materials important to human life. Some people begin to view Cindel as a tyrant government. So a rebellion group has been formed to overthrow the government.

Setting:

The setting takes place in a world that's still trying to be rebuilt from the Astral Fall. The world is still under developed but it is making progress in some areas. Some towns are able to keep monsters at bay by a special barrier created by Cindel.

Characters:

Dominic Baker

Age: 25

The main protagonists of the game. He was an orphan with his younger sister after the Astral Fall. He joined the Cindel army when he was five years old. He works hard to protect and take care of his younger sister. At the age of eighteen he was enlisted in the army special forces group, OMEGA. During the course of the game he confronts the rebel group. And confronts Astralologists, people who believe the Astral Fall was divine intervention from a god. Also during his journey he finds out the mystery of Astral Fall and the true impact it held.

Kyle Setling

Age: 25

Dominic's best friend since childhood. He has a crush for Dominic's younger sister. He is a gentle and pure hearted man who would help anyone without thinking about it. His parents was killed during the Astral Fall and he was alone until he met Dominic in Cindel. He would do whatever it takes to help Dominic in his journey.

Miria Crescent:

Age: 23

She's a traveling news reporter who is always looking for a story. She has a carefree spirit who also likes to engage in a good fight. She joins Dominic's group to get a big story from the rebel group. She holds a mysterious past with her former partner that she won't tell anyone about.

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Game Genre: Fantasy RPG

Credits:

Yanfly

Terrax

Heartbreak61

Alistair

Neon Black

Mr. Trivel

Sasuke Kannazuki

Shaz

Rexal

Soulpour777

Yoji Ojima

Galenmereth

Galv

DEMO:

http://www.mediafire.com/download/c7z596uz3kdvp99/Legend_Of_Astral.rar
 
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Hmm. Might I suggest throwing such a large image under a spoiler tag?

Anyways, onward to feedback!

  • Quite a few grammatical errors throughout. They're fairly minor but might want to skim over the dialogue a few times.
  • I suggest making the cell-phone a bit easier to access. Perhaps you can utilize Yanfly's button common events for it when it's released on the 23rd of this month.
  • The waitress at the bar blocks the entrance sometimes.
  • Map areas are very square at the moment. However, it's still beta, so it's not really an issue unless the maps stay the same.
  • Might want to start Dom off with some skills in the beginning. The ATB bar loads kinda slow and it's just a attack spam slug fest. Might want to increase the ATB speed for faster battles.
  • Lower the frequency of monster battles too! Like by a lot. It's like a battle every 7 steps.
  • Add some indication on where to go early on. Add a small sign, post, or something to indicate where the player should go next. 
  • Game crashes when going to the East area. Fails to load A Gentle Breeze Audio.
 

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