Oh dang, I've just replied a feedback a few seconds ago. And this amazing stuff comes out from nowhere.lol Thank you so much, dude! Please give me a little bit time, since it's a long post to read. XD
Dude, nice update there. Still going hard on the game's making?
I have some news to report that i did play Avelion 5 a few days ago (yes, the old version that i downloaded long ago) but unfortunately the video file was corrupted and there was only sounds left so i will just only post my experience with the game here.
Yep. I dunno why, maybe it's the mood swing. Or maybe, it was the morale boost from you,
but I think I start enjoying it again.

Thank god, you didn't upload that video. I feel
embarassed by the game presentation, some parts of it are "too much".lol
- For the first cutescenes, it was short and you autoran swiftly the textscrolls so i missed a lot of information, so can't comment much on the story. But the those cuts were cool. Nice and flashy action. Keep going that way, i mean the way you set up those cuts, it's good! Graphics are decent too although they are not consistent. I mean parts looked high res but others were low res, stuff like that. Sound and music was good, even those were all defaut stuff, but the way you make use of them, it all worked out effeciently. I really loved it when the first cutscene ended and the credit scenes were about to show up, the music transition was so good.
Is that too fast? I keep that autorun textscrolls in the current version. Should I add 1 sec for each
message? Yes, graphics are not consistent in some parts of the game, because I'm using graphic
source & RTP from both RM MV and RM VX Ace at the same. I love the old RTP from VX Ace.
I tried my best to upscale these graphics, but I guess, the result is not good enough. XD
Thanks for the kind words! Yep I learned a lot on how to choose the music from you.
- Now it's the cons. And cons are everything bout the gameplay, lol. It did seem like you don't spend much time on the gameplay yet. It's confusing and convoluted. You introduced a lot of things and small mechanics right off the start which made me feel overwhelming, and i turned to not care a bit about those mechanics. I didn't have a clear instruction either, and i can go literally anywhere in the world. I was so lost right after i got the control on the character.
Yes, I couldn't agree more with this one. Not only the game presentation, sometimes the texts too.
I have this bad habit called
"Put everything into something". For example; too much information in a single message, too much stuff in a single game feature, too much explanation in a single tutorial, and the list goes on. You pointed out everything right there.



That's a headshot, dude.lol
- Combat is side scrolling action based which i'm kinda fond of. It had a nice feel to it and full of potentials but seemed a little bit lackluster and basic atm.
- So, like i said, maybe you didn't have much time to spend on the gameplay overall so i'm not complaining, just letting you know how it all went for me. And i hope this small feedback will somehow help you improve Livenel.
That was also my first impression about LMBS mechanic, I really like it, it looks nice and cool. But at certain point, I realized that this battle system will getting myself into a whole load of troubles. Especially if I want a deep battle mechanic. That's why I changed it back to the Sideview Battle System. I think I've just made a good decision.
P/s: I just replayed the first part of the game again to hold a gasp on the story for the sake of this review, and there are nothing wrong with it. I think it's intriguing! So what were you crying about lol. Perhaps it got worse the later part of it? Btw, you don't use Discordance anymore?
Yes, it got worse the later part of it. I messed up with the story and the game lores. XD
The dialogue are stretched in the case of a conversation. I guess I'll take your advice
into account, not only the gameplay, but the story and the dialogue too. I'll remaking
these stuff carefully this time, perhaps at a slower pace.
*I'm still using the "Discordance" in the title, is it a bad idea to use it?