Looking for title screen help.

[Alexander Hawksmoor]

I'm looking for someone who can help me with my title screen design. I have the logo and some magical crystals to go with but I'm struggling mainly due to lack of imagination on the title screen design. As for design I'm looking for the top half to be brighter and more cheerful and the bottom half to be more murky and ominous.

 

[HexMozart88]

I'd love to help you... but I don't know what your game's about. Do you have a thread or something so I know what colours and stuff to use for the background? 

 

[Alexander Hawksmoor]

This is what im looking for, I'd just like it to look a little less default rpg maker if thats possible.

 

[HexMozart88]

Have not forgotten about you. I have started working. You can expect it pretty soon. 


Edit: I've finished for now, but I'm open to criticism.


https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8MRQKz4-tnVTTk3dDByb2NjQzQ/view?usp=sharing 

 

[Alexander Hawksmoor]

I have to admit I think it looks fantastic. I really love how you managed to get that transition from light to dark whilst making it look so natural. Thankyou very much for this is is very much appreciated.

 

[HexMozart88]

I'm very glad you like it, @Alexander Hawksmoor. 

 

[MRHAPPYFACEMAN]

If you are still reading this thread, I have just a couple of suggestions. Have all of the spheres lined up on the bottom and shrink "Shadows Beckoning" just a bit. If you do this, the actual title of your game will stick out more. I have been researching this exact question you asked for years now and found that the less stuff there is on a title screen, the more appealing it is to someone that is glazing over all of the titles of different games. Take a look at how Twilight, Hunger Games, and Undertale have their titles set up. They are by far the most popular thing in their categories. The title has a lot to do with it.


Of course, its just a suggestion however