Mana of Life Characters

[Kazuki]

Here's illustrations of the three playable characters Corellia, Kaisetsu and Zanor for my RPG Maker VX ace game "Mana of LIfe". P.S. I am going to give you a basis on their personality but, I don't have enough of the game developed to make a Project thread yet.

Corellia:

She is the protagonist for my game, her name is Corellia Leamont. She is very empathetic and likes to keep the peace. However, she thinks more with her heart which leads to making bad decisions.

Kaisetsu:

He is one of the protagonists of my game, his name is Kaisetsu Haruto. He is Analytical observing his surrounding and quite intelligent. He has a crude sense of humor and he isn't very trusting towards others.

Zanor:

He is one of the protagonists of my game, his name is Zanor. He is very assertive and makes decisions with little to no hesitation. This leads to him forgetting the human element of his decisions.

 

[Haofeng]

Looks good so far! I like the design of the characters and their clothing, but the proportions Keisetsu seem a little odd. Maybe it was that you were going for perspective, but some of the anatomy is wrongly sized for where it should be placed. Look at his left leg, it doesn't really match up with where it should be, but that's quite an easy thing to edit, so don't worry! I know it can be frustrating when you draw something and realise the proportions are wrong, but it's better to fix it sooner than later!

Also, a very small note, Corellia's left leg seems to be in front of her the hem of her skirt, which is a little strange considering it ought to be behind it! But it's really minor and nothing huge.

Again, I really like the designs and it seems like you're really thinking about the characters, which is good!

Good luck!

 

[Kazuki]

Looks good so far! I like the design of the characters and their clothing, but the proportions Keisetsu seem a little odd. Maybe it was that you were going for perspective, but some of the anatomy is wrongly sized for where it should be placed. Look at his left leg, it doesn't really match up with where it should be, but that's quite an easy thing to edit, so don't worry! I know it can be frustrating when you draw something and realise the proportions are wrong, but it's better to fix it sooner than later!

Also, a very small note, Corellia's left leg seems to be in front of her the hem of her skirt, which is a little strange considering it ought to be behind it! But it's really minor and nothing huge.

Again, I really like the designs and it seems like you're really thinking about the characters, which is good!

Good luck!

I fixed the few things you pointed out, I am not sure how I did with Kaisetsu's left leg but I fixed it the best I could.

 

[Kazuki]

bump

 

[Sharm]

Bump?  Why?  What sort of response are you looking for?  Did you add anything new?

 

[Kazuki]

Bump?  Why?  What sort of response are you looking for?  Did you add anything new?

No, I just want more people to see it that's all.

 

[Amysaurus]

This is absolutely and totally my opinion, but I prefer seeing art threads bumped with new art rather than just bumped *shrugs*

Anyway, feedback-mode activated!

>Corellia: There's something about her face (I think it's the chin/mouth area) that doesn't give a very feminine impression. Besides that her head looks fine, besides her ear being a bit low. Her legs might be a bit too thin as well. 

Her color scheme is very nice, though!

>Kaisetsu: His head looks great, but I think you went a bit overboard with the foreshortening! His limbs seem way too thin for his body, especially his left leg. I can't tell if he's supposed to have a left arm or not, but if he is, where is it?

Again, nice work with the color scheme. Orange and blue is always a nice combo. 

>Zanor: This one is pretty nice, though him only having three claws looks a bit awkward. I think it's because the rest of him looks so human in proportion. I really enjoy his armor design, though I can't say I like it with his brown scales.

Overall, these are nice! I can tell you put in a lot of effort.

 

[Kazuki]

Here it is the image that will be used for the title screen for "Mana of LIfe" It features all three playable characters Corellia, Kaisetsu and Zanor. The woman in the background is the goddess of their world Afina.

 

[Sharm]

No, I just want more people to see it that's all.

I was afraid of that.  Don't do it again please.