FREE Monigote Fantasy [Proofreaders needed!]

[BitBrosGames]

Monigote Fantasy (moh-nee-goh-tay fantasy) is a comedy and adventure RPG about the journey of a paper doll-like white little fellow of few words who just happened to become the Legendary Hero, along with his loyal companions.
It's made using RPG Maker 2k3, we're translating it into English and just released an English Beta covering about the 80% of the game length (~13-14 hours).

The thing is that we're not native speakers in English and the game has a lot of jokes and wordplays so we'd be really grateful if you could help us proofread the game (especially if English is your first language) to make sure they work in English and there are no weird-sounding lines.

I know it sounds like a lot of work, but if you need some proofreading (especially in Spanish) or betatesting for your game, I'd be glad to help you. Also, I hope you have fun playing the game.

Thanks for your support!

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BitBros! Games​

 

[ghoulsteak]

Hey! I'm a native English speaker and I'd be interested in helping you out. I haven't worked on proofreading much, but I write short fiction sometimes as a hobby.

 

[BitBrosGames]

Thanks!
Just sent you a PM.

 

[BitBrosGames]

Hi! Just updated the beta with some corrections in the translation (most of them thanks to ghoulsteak!) and a couple of minor fixes.
The savestates are compatible with this new version and will also be compatible with the final and complete one.
If anyone is interested in testing the game, please let me know.

 

[BitBrosGames]

Hope you don't mind if I bump this thread.
You can find the link to the beta on the game post right here.
(No need to ask for the link, it's posted publicly.)
If you want to give it a go and while you're at it, let us know if something's wrong (especially with the translation), we'll really appreciate that!