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Introduction

There was once a man who woke up to find that he was old, and that he had done nothing with his life.


'Look at my face!' he shouted at his reflection. 'There aren't even any lines on it. There is absolutely nothing to mark my presence in this world. I shall walk into the sea and drown myself.'


The old man lived in a valley many miles from the sea. He had no possessions to gather, no friends to bid goodbye, and no reason to wait for first light, so he set off at once.


He grew tired, yet he refused to rest. If he achieved one thing in life, it would be to die in the manner of his choosing. Presently he came to the base of a great mountain and began to climb, his frail form clinging to icy holds, a cruel wind snapping at his ears.


Eventually he reached the summit where wraiths whirled in the mist, their ghostly forms painting trails across the thin air. He brushed ice from his tired eyes and looked for the sea, but it was nowhere to be seen. 'It must be over the next mountain,' he said to himself, and so he climbed down the other side and up another peak, still greater still than the first.


When he topped the final mountain he saw the sea spread out before him, but found no beauty in her glittering infinity. He descended into a forest where shadows slipped between the trees and strange sounds crept into his weary mind. Still he did not pause, pulling his feet from clutching roots until they found the sand.


Silence wrapped itself thickly around him as he stood on the shore, his journey complete. No voice spoke to him, no sign appeared. The sea held her breath as he crossed the bone-white sands and paddled out a little way, ready to end his life.


As calm waters caressed his chin a flash of colour drew his eye skywards, and he saw a brightly feathered bird circling overhead. As he lost himself he became the bird and saw the world spread out below him; the valley where he had wasted his life was now a tiny fold in the horizon, the mountains choked with ice and forest scraped the very clouds, and the infinite ocean shone--


For the first time he saw her beauty, and then he was himself again.


The feeling not quite faded, he clawed his way from the serene waters and back to the shore. 'It is as good a place as any,' he remarked. 'I may as well stay here.'


So he collected the enormous shells of sea snails from the wash and enchanted wood from the forest and made himself a resting place. Then he sat in the crooked structure's shade to hide from angry suns and waited for death, quite unaware that death had other plans.
 
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Many thanks! I hope it was introductory enough for the prompt. I just wanted to dive right in, really. :)
 

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Yiss! I was hoping to see your art in this style :D

Looking great, that seems like a cheese tower, heheh.
 

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Really like both your entries so far. Will it be a running theme?
 

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Thanks, all! Yes, it is a running theme. Eventually I want to make an RM game using this world as the setting, and the world map would look like the above illustration (but, y'know, huge). Your character is the tallest of the two shapes at the bottom, and the game would feature characters like the old man from the story. Ideally the game would be accompanied by a companion book / ebook containing many the stories and illustrations I'll be putting here.
 

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I love your illustration. It's so simple yet it speaks volumes. Well done! I also like your writing. :)
 

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That last paragraph from your intro got me quite hooked. I hope there's a continuation of that one even though you said that your stories will be short standalones! O 3O
 

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Please include the number of the theme you're doing next time to make it easier for me to record. Thank you :)
 

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@IronCroc: Many thanks, glad you like it! :D

@Arkane609: Thanks! We'll definitely be seeing more of the character, though perhaps not in a direct continuation. But there'll be crossovery bits for sure. :)

@EvilEagles: No problem, I'll pop it in brackets after each entries title. I certainly don't want to make this any harder for you to organise than it must be already! :)
 

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Shadows (75)

[LINK TEMPORARILY DOWN WHILE I SHUFFLE THINGS AROUND, SORRY!]

Felt like doing a music entry, so here it is! :) It's designed to loop, so it could be used in-game.
 
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Boundaries (67)

It was the third season of the first sun when the travelling fair wound its way through tall peaks and arrived at a little market town. The square had been peppered with flowers and coloured banners, and the air was rich with laughter and the sticky scent of candied moonfruit.

The townsfolk were delighted, all except for one - the baker's daughter, who could not join in the festivities. A week before she had told her mother she could speak with the foxes, and now the cruel tradeswoman kept her locked her in the basement to avoid embarrassment.

The fair proceeded through the town, its curious folk performing strange tricks and acrobatic feats for their captive audience. Nobody saw the sad blue eyes that peered from a dark crack in the brickwork of the little baker's shop. She watched well-fed ankles twirling past, caught up in the spirit of the occasion, and she sighed deeply as the brightly painted wheels of the fair carts trundled by.

As the last cart disappeared from sight a pair of very oddly shaped legs clad in threadbare trousers stopped before the gap. A moment later the figure crouched, or rather crumpled to the ground, and a pointed face, covered in powder, appeared at the crack.

The girl's first instinct was to recoil, but then she looked into large brown eyes and recognised a friend. The odd figure nodded to her, then drew itself up and vanished from sight. A few moments later she heard a scrabbling at the trapdoor that led down to her prison, and the wood creaked in protest as it opened.

The visitor stood in the gap, framed with light from the large windows of the bakery. 'Why did you not dance with us these last three moons?' asked the figure in scratching, earthy tones. When the hungry girl explained the figure bristled with anger at her cruel punishment. 'We shall accompany you to the fair. Come quickly.'

Nervously the girl followed her strange rescuer into the street. The carts had positioned themselves around the square, and the people flitted excitedly between them. A few danced around the fountain, and seeing this the powder-faced man held out a hand to the girl. The fingers were stiff, carved from strong oak. 'Will you dance with us now?'

She nodded and took the brightly polished hand. As they twirled about the fountain she saw other similarly out of place figures dotted around the square. She was not the only one to notice; many of the townsfolk glanced suspiciously at the unusual interlopers, especially when one started putting sandwiches down his trousers. Her partner moved awkwardly, the dusty clothes rippling and bulging at every step.

Suddenly the girl stopped in her tracks as she saw her mother bearing down on them, her vast face a red mask of fury. There was no time to run. 'How did you get out? No dinner for a month!' snapped the livid baker. 'And who's this?'

She prodded the figure, who bucked violently backwards. The motion was enough to free the threadbare shirt from the trousers and the foxes spilled out, blinking in the sunlight. As the villagers shrieked and pointed the other foxes abandoned their disguises, the hungry creatures swarming over the neatly laid out tables and laying waste to the cakes and sandwiches.

The powder shaken from his wise old face, the leader of the foxes leapt onto the girl's shoulder. 'This place is not for you. The day of the Great Dance is near, and we must travel north. Will you join us?'

Without hesitation the girl nodded her consent.

'Then run,' said the fox. 'Run now, and don't look back.' He gave a commanding yelp, and his brothers and sisters leapt from the tables and dashed to the girl's heels, swarming around her so the baker couldn't reach the one who had been her daughter, and then they climbed into the night, leaving the twinkling lights of the village far behind.
 

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I like the musical theme. I also love the story! :) Well done, keep it up!
 

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@ksjp17 and Iron Croc: Many thanks! More music and stories coming soon, I'm going to try and alternate evenly between visual stuff, writing and music to keep things interesting and massage my OCD. :D

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Forever and a Day (26)

[LINK TEMPORARILY DOWN WHILE I SHUFFLE THINGS AROUND, SORRY!]

As with my previous audio entry, this is designed to loop, hence the sudden cut-off.
 
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