My pathetic artwork attempts

[Lars Ulrika]

The title speaks for itself. 

Here is some drawing I made for a comic which I'm badly looking for a ....drawer. But well, as I don't find anyone I decided to go back on the drawing board.

Didn't make me puke for once even though it's far from being perfect of course. 

 

[Neverward]

Hey you really shouldn't be so down on yourself! I see a really nice looking pic right here, and I can tell that you've learned allot of good things about anatomy, posing, and clothes. I would say that all you need on this is to spend some more time coloring, and that's all really actually I like it simple too.

Practice makes perfect, and I think that if you keep working at it you'll get far.

 

[Dalph]

It's not that bad for a first attempt, it's quite good infact. 

You have to start somewhere, right?

 

[Insidious Mental Pollution]

Practice makes perfect, and I think that if you keep working at it you'll get far.

This.  Keep practicing, and be critical but accepting of your work.  You'll find that your skills will improve, as well as your feelings of accomplishment.  

 

[Archeia]

I think you're off to a good start! I recommend reading this sometime too. I hope it helps on how to perceive your own work.

 

[Lars Ulrika]

Thanks everyone for the useful advices. 

@Archeia : Wow, thank you I really needed to read something like that , what he describes is exactly me lol. 

 

[Lars Ulrika]

So , here is some new stuff : 

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As you can see I work with 3d models to handle the poses etc. So no, I didn't make the background it's a generic one that will just help me to set the stuff afterwards more precisely. 

Here is another version of it. I'm quite hesitating on the direction to take afterwards as I liked very much graphic designs like in Elektra comics. 

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[Scythuz]

I think the top one is really good

Edit: The top one in the 2nd picture post