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I been working on a story for my rpg game and i would like to hear what you think about it.....

The story starts at the end where the hero and four maidens have just defeated the demon king but the demon king pulls a fast one on them and opens a time portal and tries to teleport's himself into the past to kill the hero when he was a baby but makes a mistake while casting and is send to the future instead.

He soon finds himself in an old slum village in a wasteland island and soon learns that the hero is living in a mountain temple not far and sets out to get his revenge. After reaching the temple he is greeted by the now elder hero.

The demon king defeats him with ease but soon learns from the hero that the world has been taken over by a new demon king and that the humans on the island are the last surviving nembers of their kind. The rest of the world is controlled by monsters and demons.

what do you think?
 
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You could make it that old Demon King conquers the human...tribes (I guess, since they were defeated? You make up the setting of the world).

Adding to this the old Demon King could rebuild his empire, by recruiting the new heroes (of this timeline) and rebuilding the human kingdom with the Demon as the new and only King as the story progresses. This is the gameplay part, so you should plan what features you want to implement for the game and what is possible to do, or if any existing plugins can help you do that.

As the climax (he should have recruited human heroes and demons heroes as the story went on), the old Demon King defeats the current Demon King, as he becomes Demon emperor at the end of the story.
 

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It reminded me of the game "Demon Quest" for Snes, which I believe to be a Ghouls spinoff.
It also reminded the Dragon Quest a little.

The story itself is not very detailed, it was more like a plot.
 

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I've moved this thread to Game Ideas & Prototypes. Thank you.

 

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Looks cool man!

It have potential to develop even further! :wink:
 

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Sounds like an interesting first hook. I do enjoy unlikely allies as a setting and seems the humans and old demon king will have no choice but to work together. Only thing im uncertain of is why the other monsters will follow the old demon king now that (I guess) he is trying to reestablish humanity as a power since he got no other resources. Beyond that they are still simply loyal, that the new demon king oppresses part of them or they simply follow whoever beats them up enough.

But yeah I would check the gameplay if i heard this game existed as it has my curiosity as a hook.
 

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