Alright, so I played your game and I kept writing down things to tell you so while this might be unorganized I still think youll find it useful.
- Why do I start in some spider maze? Some introduction would be nice, like who Noah is etc. An introductory cut-scene would be great.
- The area left of the hedge maze is covered in black and it kinda breaks immersion. I'd suggest replacing the black with water as it would make more sense.
- Those logs that I've cut down for the mayor can be used in combat and do nothing. You may want to disable that.
- TP is useless, you may want to make smack cost like 5 TP or something.
- Mimic was hard until I realized that ''Smack'' hits it for 20 dmg for free instead of hitting it for 2. It's skill also does nothing as it never 'affects' Noah or the other guy.
- What's up with the Hedge Maze? Why is it there? Who planted it? I was expecting a forest, it's somewhat confusing.
- What are the mining carts supposed to do? They just keep bugging out.
- The people in the 2nd city need a ''direction fix'' on their event sheet, otherwise they keep bugging out when you interact with them from different sides.
- 500 Gold, the amount I got from a boss (Mimic) is how much I have to pay for the Inn? Thats crazy...
- Text wise it was alright, I didn't see any bugs other than one line - when Noah has to leave to capture the tiger and he asks his son to join him the 'me' is cut off on the side.
- The story is pretty cool. Definitely not something you see everyday.
Overall it was pretty good, but needs more explanation as many things are confusing.
Keep it up
