Looks like you are just looking for feedback. If that is the case, you might want to specify the rights you wish to reserve for your music. Someone new to the community might assume they can use this in their commercial/noncommercial project
You got it best than usual non-French speaking peoples I saw a lot of feminine pronouns to our masculine objects. ^^ Such as the Sun for a coffee in a published game. Your title was a great one and well appropriate and quite inspiring.