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You got it best than usual non-French speaking peoples I saw a lot of feminine pronouns to our masculine objects. ^^ Such as the Sun for a coffee in a published game. Your title was a great one and well appropriate and quite inspiring.
Who wants to see me mock my brother's story? Brother story: thus he summoned a mighty twenty foot lizard. My Comment: Godzilla is attacking the city! As bad as these 4 are at shopping I wouldn't be surprised if Jun didn't proudly return with a chamber pot on her head. "Look at this helmet I got for 1,000 gold!"