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I just recently finished the full game of my game "One's Desolation".
One's Desolation is an adventure horror game that controls on a 2D plane. (similar to a platformer) There are scenarios where your choices can affect whether or not the main character can make it out alive. This game is very story-driven so expect a fair bit of cutscenes.
What I want you to do is tell me if you find any bugs or any other quality of life improvements I could implement. This game will take roughly 2 hours to complete.
Liridona Cichy: She is the main character of One's Desolation. She is a shy and quiet person, having trouble standing up for herself and speaking up. Where she lacks confidence she makes up for it by helping others out and listening to other people's woes.
Draven: An extra-dimensional demon that helps Liridona escape from her home. He is rather confident and lives in the moment, not putting much thought into his actions. He has a deep-seated hatred for Nathaniel and will label him a "fiend".
Nathaniel: Liridona's arranged spouse-to-be. He is cunning and manipulative. He loves toying with other people's lives and can be quite possessive of Liridona.
Adele: The mother of Liridona. On the surface, she appears kind and caring, but underneath that facade, she is actually cold and stern. She and Nathaniel have a sinister agenda for Liridona but her true intentions are unknown.
Controls
Arrow keys: Move and scroll through the menus
Space bar, Z key or Enter key: Interact with objects or people
C Key: Open/Close Menu
X Key: Cancel choices
Feedback I am looking for
- Any bugs and/or typos you may find
- Is the horror used effectively?
- How are the story and characters?
Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/cesuqwm01sdbslp/One's Desolation -Game- 1.0.zip?dl=0
One's Desolation is an adventure horror game that controls on a 2D plane. (similar to a platformer) There are scenarios where your choices can affect whether or not the main character can make it out alive. This game is very story-driven so expect a fair bit of cutscenes.
What I want you to do is tell me if you find any bugs or any other quality of life improvements I could implement. This game will take roughly 2 hours to complete.
In the esteemed estate of the Cichy mansion, there seems to be a void within the household. However, one day Adele Cichy tells her daughter Liridona she has set up an arranged marriage with a prince named Nathaniel. Everything seems to be going well between the two of them until Liridona hears something she shouldn't have from the prince. So, can she escape from Nathaniel's grasp or will she succumb to his persistence?
Liridona Cichy: She is the main character of One's Desolation. She is a shy and quiet person, having trouble standing up for herself and speaking up. Where she lacks confidence she makes up for it by helping others out and listening to other people's woes.Draven: An extra-dimensional demon that helps Liridona escape from her home. He is rather confident and lives in the moment, not putting much thought into his actions. He has a deep-seated hatred for Nathaniel and will label him a "fiend".Nathaniel: Liridona's arranged spouse-to-be. He is cunning and manipulative. He loves toying with other people's lives and can be quite possessive of Liridona.Adele: The mother of Liridona. On the surface, she appears kind and caring, but underneath that facade, she is actually cold and stern. She and Nathaniel have a sinister agenda for Liridona but her true intentions are unknown.Controls
Arrow keys: Move and scroll through the menus
Space bar, Z key or Enter key: Interact with objects or people
C Key: Open/Close Menu
X Key: Cancel choices
Feedback I am looking for
- Any bugs and/or typos you may find
- Is the horror used effectively?
- How are the story and characters?
Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/cesuqwm01sdbslp/One's Desolation -Game- 1.0.zip?dl=0
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