Opinion on my kinematic scene

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  1. Arigatonty

    Arigatonty Veteran Veteran

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    Hi everybody

    I need your opinion on a cinematic scene that I create. I would like to know if it is coherent? if we have not improved? if there are other ideas? and also for music and sound effects ...

    thank you in advance

     
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    A very nice cutscene. Mine are worse so far.
     
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    Thank you but the result does not suit me 100%, I'm too demanding ^^
     
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    Since it seems like you're just looking for feedback and not asking a support question, I'm moving this out of MV Support.

    Moving to Game Ideas & Prototypes.


    Please keep in mind that this is an English forum, so many of the people here won't be able to understand the French in your cutscene. If you want more feedback, then you should add an English version.
     
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  5. Astfgl66

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    So the cinematic itself is nice enough. i liked the camera work and the use of animations.
    The rest is very very cliché though:

    List of cliché rpg tropes in a 3 min video:
    - The hero is a young boy (most likely 17, as is tradition)
    - Tomorrow is his birthday
    - The game starts with the hero in his bed
    - Prophetic dreams
    - Elemental crystals
    - Must rescue the princess
    - First level is a forest

    With a complete and utter lack of spellchecking to boot, and also very weird phrasing.
    I laughed.
     
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    thank you for your remarks
     
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