Pixel Art Critique
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This is pretty good. Only two suggestions:
(1) The posts on the ends should not overlap above the roof, but should appear behind the roof's edge just like the middle posts do.
(2) The roof colors - especially the yellow one - seem to have a bit too much contrast between the light parts and the shadows. The result is the color looks a bit choppy rather than smooth. I'd make the dark parts a bit lighter.
Otherwise, looks great!
(1) The posts on the ends should not overlap above the roof, but should appear behind the roof's edge just like the middle posts do.
(2) The roof colors - especially the yellow one - seem to have a bit too much contrast between the light parts and the shadows. The result is the color looks a bit choppy rather than smooth. I'd make the dark parts a bit lighter.
Otherwise, looks great!
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Good you noticed the overlap, I was hoping to see if it's good or not. I'll stick to your suggestion and make them appear behind the roof's edge.
I'll try to make the roof appear lighter, thanks to you I now know what the problem is.
Thanks for the post!
I'll try to make the roof appear lighter, thanks to you I now know what the problem is.
Thanks for the post!
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