Are you wondering if your game story is interesting? Did you hit a snag or a bout of writers' block? Are you having trouble figuring out how your story gets from point A to point B? Or maybe your brain is brimming with plot ideas and you want to help a fellow designer? If so, this is the right thread for you! Post your ideas, plot, parts of plot or history-related questions here. Answer and give feedback to other posters. Rules: If you're asking for feedback: - Be descriptive. Include the game genre, atmosphere, characters or any other important information. - Tag and "spoiler" your spoilers. Warn the reader(s) when you're discussing parts of your plot that are meant to be a surprise. - Note your inspiration(s) or offer an example. Referencing an existing game makes it easier for people to imagine what you want to achieve. If you're offering feedback: - Tell us who you're offering feedback to. You can do this by quoting parts of the person's post or by making a reference to their name (such as "@user"). - Tell us which part of their post you're giving feedback for. You may quote relevant portions of their post. But please don't entirely quote lengthy posts. - Use spoilers when answering situations meant to be a surprise. - Have fun!