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Im not sure if I want this song to be in a graveyard, or a zombie's house. But here's the song i made:
This track is very dry, I would put some reverb to add some presence to the track.
Also be careful with the panning, my right ear didn't get much love![]()
Other than that, the composition is good, there isn't really a memorable melody though. By that I mean what you would hum if you were asked to describe this song, but in the background it would work.
Chaconnes generally don't have much in terms of melodic theme. they are based off the circle of fifths, and Bach generally restated rhythms with different chords, or restarted chords with different rhythms. his most famous of all really has no solitary melody, making it difficult for many to pick up the melody. they are generally solo pieces, but I made it a duet. and for the most part the melody is hidden behind chords, sounds better on a real instrument, even his most famous chaconne.
I would work on it, but I made a mistake with saving the file and so I don't have a copy of it anymore in manuscript form![]()
Im not sure if I want this song to be in a graveyard, or a zombie's house. But here's the song i made:
Here's something for a client. They liked it so much they adopted me into their team, and now I work for them "full time" on our commercial game project. wooo!
This is to a single location. One location has 8 different areas, for each of the four seasons; day and night.
Here is Springtime, during the day. Lots of tweaks went into this and I'm rather proud of how it came out.
New battle track I'm working on. Have been a bit lazy for a long time now. Time to get back in the game. It's a WIP and it's in a 5/4 time signature.
Alright guys! This is the first time I'm posting here and this is also the first track I've ever composed so it's really umpolished but I really wanted to hear an opinion.
I don't like much how the horns start, but I don't know how to make the passage feel natural..
There's no way this is your first track
For your brass at the begining I would maybe shift it half a beat to the right. Also the ending is a bit abrupt, I would finish it on a soft brass/string swell.
Seriously though, this is amazing!
Hey, first of all thanks a lot for your kind words!
I worked on it and I'm quite happy with the end result, I followed your advice for the brass at the start and also added a better closure. I also fixed some mistakes in the harmony and orchestration
http://www.mediafire.com/download/mo4a4iv9a5jytah/The+King%27s+Return.wav
A transcription/arrangement of Toby Fox's "Once Upon a Time" (Undertale) I whipped for fun and practice. Like I said, I mostly did it for fun/practice, so the production isn't top notch, but since this is my very first transcription/arrangement, feedback is greatly appreciated!
Alright guys! This is the first time I'm posting here and this is also the first track I've ever composed so it's really umpolished but I really wanted to hear an opinion.
I don't like much how the horns start, but I don't know how to make the passage feel natural..
http://www.mediafire.com/download/xjf744n9x2hpt1x/The+King%27s+Return.wav
First of all, MP3s are your best bet with downloadables. Or you can use soundcloud.
The melody isn't bad. You seem to have a decent grip on music theory. The horns are are very synthetic. The suspended cymbals were nice. I'm gonna assume you bought kontakt? The strings sound like they came from there.
Anyway, keep it up!
Do you have some advice on how to make the sound more realistic?