- Jan 11, 2016
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here is a snow overworld theme:
Thanks for the feed back! @Tianlong! A sorrow was when I was learning a few new tricks haha. The last song I composed was mother tree. I was really getting the hang of it. I was studying suikoden, final fantasy and dragon quest songs. The reason I ended up stopping was due to personal reasons which made me stop a lot of things. I was thinking about getting back into it. Not sure how rusty I would be but maybe I can use you to give me some pointers and criticism?@HexMozart88 Your French is good because that is exactly it !
@Eyehavey0u I listened to a cuple of your songs and I like what I'm hearing. The first one is different, a kind of a hybrid of techno/dance and classical which wouldn't work in theory but fits in this song.
On 'A Sorrow', I would maybe give it a little more stereo image. It feels a little bit cluttered in the center. The instruments need more breathing space.
Anyways, why haven't you compose since then ?
Alright, cool. I learned French in school, but I had to stop for art obligations. So looks like I haven't lost it yet.Your French is good because that is exactly it !
Hey. It's my first time here, but I kinda want to a piece with y'all. It's most likely going to become battle music for a game I'm working on, but just take a listen if you'd like.
Click - not sure how to do the thing where it's already here
Happy Halloween Everybody
here is a snow overworld theme:
Here's one made for a calm and soothing lake area. I want to rework the last section and the mix but here it is anyway.
Note to myself : I really need to change my soundcloud/facebook picture.
Edit : Don't know it the embedded link works so here's the hyperlink :
Another track from the game Aria Eclipsis in developing
The violin is also too dry, add (just a tiny bit of) reverb.
The crickets and birds are too loud, feels like noise at that point. You should keep it in the background in my opinion.
The rest is great, good work
I've reuploaded this fixing the mix@Tirian Thanks man ! I love constructive criticism like the one you gave me. I didn't work the mix too much and I wanted to get back to it soon. Your comments will really help me shape this song in the best way possible. The volume automation for the choir...I never really thought about that and I use choirs a lot so, I will try that for sure. You're right about the bell's low end too. I wondered if someone would point that out when I uoloaded it.
I really like this song. I found the melody nice and hopeful. Thought it could fit as a town theme or a joyful scene. I can't really comment on the mix since I listened to it on my girlfriend's laptop but I'll try and give it another shot tomorrow, when I get back home. I'll give you my insights on it then.
Thanks for the fast reply. Yeah, unfortunately this is my first time using this library, and it is free. Can't afford East West or anything like that when I'm saving money for a Focusrite 2i2 so I can record guitar. So yeah, the samples aren't the greatest thing but it will do I guess. Taking into account this is a proof of concept, that last repetition wasn't intended. I will keep on working on this piece, but it will take some time. And I do need to add more reverb indeed, after changing to Reaper it was my first time using ReaVerb.@YagamiKyo For this being your weak point, I think the end result isn't half bad. I think my main gripe with your song is more with the mixing and the instruments samples themselves than the composition. Even though it's still a little bit repetitive and I would work on the transition near the end where everything stops, I think it's promising. Keep refining your orchestral technique...and add some more reverb !