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Hello, I recently released a free game on Itch and would be grateful for any comments or feedback. Link Below

https://pehriska-games.itch.io/project-alldevaih

About the Game

You play as Mercury Shaw, having recently settled into a new life in a new city, you get a call from an old friend. Reluctantly, you get dragged into a sinister conspiracy involving dark forces, sinister corporations and forgotten foes.

Project Alldevaih is a short narrative focused adventure game set in the near future.

This game serves as an introduction into a universe where more projects are planned.

Playtime - Approximately 20 Minutes. Experiencing all content will take approximately 30 Minutes.

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Thanks for your time.

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Interesting, a lot of the things you have done, are things I want to do, so it's interesting to see your ideas in action.
Only played for a few minutes, did notice something

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At this stall, you can walk on the stall shelf
 

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Interesting, a lot of the things you have done, are things I want to do, so it's interesting to see your ideas in action.
Only played for a few minutes, did notice something

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At this stall, you can walk on the stall shelf
Hello, Thanks for playing and for pointing out the tile issue. Glad you found it interesting.
 

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Ok, finished Pt. 1, here's a few thoughts

The dialogue is pretty good, a few mannerisms that you have thrown in really do bring it to life and prevent the characters from sounding wooden. Didn't enjoy getting into convos with ALL the NPCs, but I can see you did it to give the game atmosphere.

The story-line is engaging, I did battle to keep up with the various corporations etc., but you have left a lot of room for story expansion. Doing the game based on linking events entirely was a nice touch, not dealing with combat was a new touch (for me anyway).

The more I played, the more I saw the same ideas I had come through in your game (back to the drawing board for me). Can see you put extra thought and effort into little details, they did not go unnoticed.

Keep it up!
 

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