RMMZ Project Alldevaih (A Short Narrative Game)

[Pehriska]

Hello, I recently released a free game on Itch and would be grateful for any comments or feedback. Link Below

https://pehriska-games.itch.io/project-alldevaih

About the Game

You play as Mercury Shaw, having recently settled into a new life in a new city, you get a call from an old friend. Reluctantly, you get dragged into a sinister conspiracy involving dark forces, sinister corporations and forgotten foes.

Project Alldevaih is a short narrative focused adventure game set in the near future.

This game serves as an introduction into a universe where more projects are planned.

Playtime - Approximately 20 Minutes. Experiencing all content will take approximately 30 Minutes.






Thanks for your time.

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[Pehriska]

Hellooo, I have recently released an updated version of this game. Here's the link to the new Itch page - https://pehriska-games.itch.io/sapphire-city

Thanks!

 

[Gunmetal_Dreams]

Interesting, a lot of the things you have done, are things I want to do, so it's interesting to see your ideas in action.
Only played for a few minutes, did notice something


At this stall, you can walk on the stall shelf

 

[Pehriska]

Interesting, a lot of the things you have done, are things I want to do, so it's interesting to see your ideas in action.
Only played for a few minutes, did notice something

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At this stall, you can walk on the stall shelf

Hello, Thanks for playing and for pointing out the tile issue. Glad you found it interesting.

 

[Gunmetal_Dreams]

Ok, finished Pt. 1, here's a few thoughts

The dialogue is pretty good, a few mannerisms that you have thrown in really do bring it to life and prevent the characters from sounding wooden. Didn't enjoy getting into convos with ALL the NPCs, but I can see you did it to give the game atmosphere.

The story-line is engaging, I did battle to keep up with the various corporations etc., but you have left a lot of room for story expansion. Doing the game based on linking events entirely was a nice touch, not dealing with combat was a new touch (for me anyway).

The more I played, the more I saw the same ideas I had come through in your game (back to the drawing board for me). Can see you put extra thought and effort into little details, they did not go unnoticed.

Keep it up!

 

[kjgames]

oops

 

[TheAM-Dol]

@kjgames really tasteless. Checked your profile, all you have done is tastelessly spammed your game on other people's posts.

Please contribute something to the community instead of being a leech.

 

[kjgames]

oopsie

 

[slimmmeiske2]

Alright, I've removed your link from this post @kjgames. Stop spamming your game in unrelated threads, that's against our rules.

And now back on topic, please.

 

[Freank]

I am still not downloading the game... but watching the screenshots posted... I don't know. the maps look very empties and made with different tilesets...

 

[Pehriska]

I am still not downloading the game... but watching the screenshots posted... I don't know. the maps look very empties and made with different tilesets...

Thanks for looking, this was a first attempt just using basic assets, I have released an updated version called Sapphire City but I guess you've already found it as you've commented on that too.