currently working on a old manga I abandonned due the story get scrapped (the person who worked with me scrapped the main idea for make a another idea I don't really liked...)
Now I return to the main idea with some fresh idea
nice @nio, we're actually giving a graphic novel a shot too just to go as a back story to one of the cities in our game. I like how you did the frames in the example though. Not the usual squares
posting this sketchy sketch because it's late and my judgement is impaired.
the girl is nio's. *points up at previous post*
--Page 5 feedback, because i can:
Cluly: I shall drool on your compositions. Your sense of lighting is amazing.
nio kasgami: I hope you finished those pictures of young leandre and horace. Don't let your sketches go to waste!
Personigo de la Ĉefo: That was a huge art dump! All your stuff is nice. I especially like the first bust and the skill icons you made. Claps for all those animations. I can't even manage a couple of frames.
100LittleDreams: The line/colour style you used makes that image look really bold, which is different than some of your other pics on dA. I think it looks really professional!
Bloodmorphed: I prefer the first drawing. Keep practicing that hair though. Sometimes when i have trouble drawing hair that's flowing in a certain direction, i start by drawing tons of strands... then slowly "cut away" hair until it looks normal.
Jiggy: Since you asked for some criticism, i think the left arm and the sword look a little flat, but i don't know how to fix it. :x Other than that, i think it makes for the perfect cutscene image. Interesting light source and perspective too!
I've been on a really good streak lately of working on my game for at least a little bit each day. Even if I only complete one small task, it is still a much better pace than what I was maintaining previously!
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