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Concept demo:

https://drive.google.com/#folders/0B1xf1Z_mpnmKdmFrbkVXVFNELVk

Philosophy

This I our attempt at creating a mature 2D RPG. This has come about after seeing that main stream games are too afraid to take a chance and deliver a mature story to gamers. Some games try and somewhere along the lines give up and revert back to "gamers are just kids they don’t get any of this". We are going to try and push the boundary of games as art. The goal is to present a truly unique world that is real and cruel like our own without shying away from the brutality that exists.
Single-Player Game

Story

A dark tale of a young man and the things he has to overcome in life and his tragic demise. Themes of loss, religion, love and forgiveness will be explored along with war and what its toll is upon the people.
There isn't much I can say since it's not a "Great evil tries to destroy the world and a band of anoying kids save by finding some random artifact because of reasons". My goal is to explore as deep as posible every theme we present.
Hours of Game play

Main story is as long as it needs to be, by that i mean that i am in the process of re-writing the story and the first time it was around 45 thousand words and now i am not even half way and have already passed that. We're looking at deep experience that seeks to immerse the player. And with the side quests the game will be a lot longer than that.
Common Questions

What is the game?

The game is a 2D action RPG, with many other mechanics added to give a new experience. It is set in a fantasy medieval world that is not fantastic. And will feature brutal, gory combat.

Why create this game?
To provide an intriguing story that is deep and will make you feel uncomfortable, a story that will have you thinking for a long time after you have finished it.

Where does the game take place?

The game takes place in Lehen Lur a world that is relatively young, but full of turmoil. Specifically in the Valerin Kingdom.

What do I control?

You take the role of Andrew, and sometimes you will play as an unnamed soldier. Andrew is a young man that will rise up against the oppression and build his army to fight for his people.

How many characters do I control?

You only directly control Andrew or the soldier, but you will be in a party of five at most and you can give the others commands and build your tactics accordingly to the fight. You will also be in charge of your army from time to time and will have huge field battles.

What is the main focus?

You have to bring peace to Valerin and overthrow the king. You do this by gathering characters and building your army.

What’s different?

The game will feature a brutal 2D combat mechanic; this game will not be a battle of the health bar. The player will have to actively gather his army and grow its number by getting nomads to join or keeping the people happy so that they support your army. There will be army battles, some story based and some random. A lengthy campaign with many side stories and characters that you need to recruit.
Gameplay

Normal combat.

This is a action RPG when it comes to the primary battle mechanics.
The player will be able to attack freely but only as a single strike.
If you want to do a combo then you fill two bars, each bar is an additions strike.
Normal strike = 100 DMG
Two strikes(Normal plus one bar) = 75 DMG for a total of 150 DMG
Three strikes(Normal plus two bars) = 60 DMG for a total 180 DMG
Or the player can use up both bars for a critical strike.
When enetering a critical a sphere will show on the map telling
you who is in range, you select the bodu part you want to strike
and bassed on a percentage you will know if it will land or not.
Head- Small chance of hit but if landed it will kill enemy
Body- High chance but the bulk of armor is there reducing DMG. If you hit after some damage has been done to the armor before it might insta kill.
Arms - Depends on angle or if they are holding shield. If hit can disarm.
Legs- If hit it imobalizes the enemy.
Most criticals can cause bleed or remove threats such as the arm wielding the sword or cut of a leg and so on.
You gain bars slowly from evading and blocking or if you get hit.
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Field battles.

Throughout the game story you will fight army battles on the map, these will be turn based like a tactical RPG, there will also be random field battles that you can take on, it will be a good way for each unit to gain experience and become more effective in its class. When you go in to a Field Battle you will see your army units (spearmen, swordsmen, cavalry etc) you will then choose which unit you want to take command of and choose its action for that turn, a turn end when all units have completed their turn. The type of unit will decide how far you can move, the reach of your attack and what special abilities you have. Each unit will have officers roles that will be taken by characters you have collected thus far; each officer adds to the attack and defense of the unit some will give extra abilities. After getting close to an enemy unit and choosing the attack option you will be taken to the battle screen where you have a limited amount of time to do as much damage in real time combat.

• Archers> foot units. If they are shooting arrows, if engaged in hand to hand combat the archers will take massive damage. Keep your archer at a safe distance.
• Foot units> archers. Get close to deal damage, there are many types of foot units making them very versatile, some are stronger than others. When you're creating your new unit you can choose what type it will be.
• Cavalry> foot units. Use the cavalry wisely and plan your attack, horse will get tired. Try charging from the sides or back, the cavalry charge is a special skill once you choose the direction it can't be changed, when the horses are tired retreat them so they can rest.
Building your headquarters.

At a point in the story you will receive your own headquarters, there you will have shops and craftsmen. Your base grows by recruiting new characters from the side stories.

Recruiting new characters.
There will be many side characters that you can recruit through the duration of your play thru; some will be harder than other and some will require you to get other character before they join you.

Recruiting soldiers to your army.
Once you can build your army you will be tasked with keeping the general population happy. You do this by defeating bandit groups, rogue armies and so on. If a town is happy with you than after certain amount of time they will send new men to refill your ranks. You can also get more men by getting randomly generated groups of nomads to join you after you complete a favor for them. But the size of your army is depended on how many officers you have and you can only get more officers by doing their side quests.
The Game World
Overview
Valerin


The Grehn Empire ruled the country with an iron fist and oppressed the common people, ensuring only that the ones in power or in the favor of the emperor could live in comfort while the rest suffered and died from the disease and famine that was spreading throughout the country brought by the eruption of Vherdu.
After many years of oppression the people revolted against the empire and defeated them claiming their independence. The kingdom of Bristan was born from the revolution. The royal family controlled the country for the next twenty years until prince Staurf took control and began oppressing the people once more.
Again the people revolted, this time led by Valren Gres who fought the prince for the next twenty years until he die from old age and command was taken up by his son Taren. Taren fought the remaining part of the revolution and defeated the prince in the capital city, Linburn.
And so he renamed the country Valerin to honor his father. Thirty years have passed since, lord Taren is stricken by a disease and lying on his death bed, with Baren his son set to take the throne.

The Physical World
Overview
Valerin is a dark and moody weather place. People there make their living of the land which is rich and fertile. Valerin is home to the largest city on the continent Linburn. The people of Valerin hate the empire and everything it stand for still remembering the cruelty that they had to endure.
The Valerin have a strong military force with world renowned riders. Citizens have to give three years of mandatory service to the country from the age eighteen if they choose to join the army.

Travel
you travel on the world map from location to location by the roads that connect all this places together. The travel will be similar to Final Fantasy Tactics.

Weather
During the winter the country is dark and gloomy; it does not rain much off season. During the spring and summer time the country is full of colors and vibrant. Weather will also affect your battle tactics.

Day and Night
During the day it is safer to travel, at night you will see more bad guys and you will have more fighting. Also some missions for the side stories can only be done at night and some characters will only appear at night. When reaching a travel point you can choose to either enter it during night or day time. The chalange will vary acording to the time.
Time
time travels faster when traveling the world map. Each few stapes will be a day.

Camera overview

A fixed top down or isometric camera that follows you around. When in the world map you will get a satellite view.

Game Engine
We will use RPG Make VX Ace. We will modify the scripts so that it does what we require of it.

What we are looking for.

Art:Animators

Spriters

Tile art

Writer to help me and brainstorm whenever I get blocked. Mainly dialogue.

Technical:

Scripter for battle systems.

Mapper to help out.

Eventer to also help out.

Important!

We can't pay and are doing this without pay ourselves. Now if the game is good and i mean really good, we will try and sell it and by that I mean put it up and if someone wants to than great. But it's very much going the direction of free to download. So don't expect any profit cause we don't. Intrested parties PM me.

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May I ask what engine it is for? Ace? And what jobs are available :) I'd be happy to help out~
 

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yeah it is Ace, well anyone is welcomed, but artists are what i need, both sprites and portrait for the charecters and other static pictures we might need in the game. also i guess i will need someone to help me with eventing this bad boy. at this moment i'm waiting for my box copy of Ace to arrive. the story is in the process of re-writing. it is done but i just didn't like some things about it and its now bigger than before.
 

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yeah it is Ace, well anyone is welcomed, but artists are what i need, both sprites and portrait for the charecters and other static pictures we might need in the game. also i guess i will need someone to help me with eventing this bad boy. at this moment i'm waiting for my box copy of Ace to arrive. the story is in the process of re-writing. it is done but i just didn't like some things about it and its now bigger than before.
I would love to help out :)  

I've only every sprited using RTP templates. As long as I have a template I'll be able to do it. I unfortunately lost my only VX sprite I have done, but if you'd like, I can show you some samples of my RMXP ones~

I'd love to help event! I bought Ace recently, so I haven't had a chance to use it. I'd love to help out though. If you'd like, give me a task to event just to see how I do :)

When it comes to drawing... Well... I draw for my own project, but not well as you can see in my picture. 

So let me know and I'll send samples :)
 

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cool, let's give it a try. that template is fine i also tried to make something from it but cant get the thing to look right. PM a sample, as for eventing any help is welcome to be honest there will be alot of it. right now i wana just a little demo but i'm still waiting for my copy to arrive it's been almost 3 weeks.
 

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It has been long, The story is coming along nicely and I just want to update that at the curent time we just need a concept art of the world map and that is all for now.
 
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Love the sound of this! I'd be glad to help out any way I can :) I could do a map for you but it depends on what you'd want it to look like? I'll work on other stuff too, I can write music and record demos if it helps too! I know you have the whole story made but if you need help with a few side quests I have experience in short story writing if you would like some ideas :)
 

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By map you meen actual drawing? Because that is what i kind of need, since the travel will be FFT style from point to point I just need a cool drawing of the world map. Side quest hell yeah! Where going to have lot's of charecter recruiting, at least 100 so we need idividual sories for them all, they don't have to be super long like the main story but not fetch quest either.
 

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I could have a go at making a pretty cool map, I'd just need some details like a rough sketch of the map to work from, names of places and stuff like that. I could come up with a few character back stories and don't worry I hate fetch quests in games so I'll be avoiding those :) my portfolio is in my signature down there V if you're interested, I haven't had the chance to put all my work up yet though.

UPDATE:
Is something like this what you had in mind? Don't worry about the landscape It's just a random one to give you an idea of what the map background could look like:

 
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there is a sketch in my original post at the botom. the legend

triangle-village

square-town

circle-city

vherdu is a volcano and where Narran is a flat top mountain with the for on top of it

squares that is like a grid- ruins

Myrna is just a forest pass

the black lines are rivers not roads there are no wroads drawn on.
 

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Here's the map, hope you like it! If you'd like me to change anything just let me know, I still have the Photoshop file with everything on different layers. If you like it as it is then just give me your email and I'll send it to you :)

 
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How is this coming along so far? It sounds like you need field maps that are 500 x 500 in size or is this not possible. Hmm 

Bastok
 

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How is it coming along, not to well. Still no artist. That is the only thing misisng, i can put the game together as cutscenes right now but we need the right art style to really make it happen. I can do the eventing, soundtrack and writing and my friend can do the costom scripts for the battle system but the art.........
 

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still open, also in the meen time if anyone need a writer im free.
 

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You need someone to focus just on the music? Feels like it would be a nice load off your back. PM me details of the job and I'll look into it.
 

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I'm not actually volunteering, sorry, but just feel the need to point out that it should be spelled Forgotten
 

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Back again. Funny thing about the spelling, it was not corrected in Word.
 

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