I've been watching this, and it's very informative. Lots of very good criticisms, even if it's a bit painful to agree with. As someone who's read Lovecraft and his friend's work (Robert E. Howard and Clark Ashton Smith) for years, I can see how my writing has been influenced by theirs, maybe a bit too much.
I'm carefully writing everything down, and it's been very entertaining so far.
F.Knight: We runs out the food! Hero: Anything could eat in this place? F.Archer: It's a bunch of Mushroom over there. I wonder it's safe to eat. F.Knight: No worries,we have to fill our inside no matter what it is.
(Hero & F.Knight Eat The Mushroom,After 10 Seconds They Collapse With Foam)