Sayako the Damned Redeemer

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Introduction

This game is about being a member of society that is oppressive and as a main character and it's your job to work against it. You help to free the redeemables and change a fictional society, even if it's just a tiny bit to get things rolling. Age rating will be RPG Maker Web friendly. :)

Sayako the Damned Redeemer (Protagonist, appears 16 years old, doesn’t age due being damned)

Likes: Freeing Redeemables, Secretly working against the system
Dislikes: Slackers, His job, Government
Combat Role: DPS/Support
Clothing/Appearance: 1.5 Inch Wide Steel Metal Collar, Kimono, scar going through left eye vertically (Eye undamaged), bright pink hair, youngful and very cute, eye color: Purple. Hair style: Pig Tails.

Despite being referred as a redeemer, she is still also a redeemable. However her “job” is not that of usual redeemable as she is one who helps others to earn their freedom by serving their “sentences.” However she is too popular amongst real redeemers to them let her go and has long since earned her freedom, which nobody has granted to her as of yet.

Sachiko (15 years old)

Likes: Voicing her opinions, opposing government
Dislikes: Chocolate
Combat Role: Support/Healer

Clothing/Appearance: 1.5 Inch Wide Steel Metal Collar, Kimono, Carries a spell book with her. Eye Color: Crimson. Hair Color: Black. Hair Style: Something medium length with head band.

She became redeemable after openly speaking against the government, which is against the law. Sachiko was sentenced to serve for 15 years under Sayako. That was five years ago. Now she is a trusted ally and one of the closest friends to the Sayako (plus protagonist is really bad in her job.)

Tsuyoi (18 years old)

Likes: Stealing, Brawling
Dislikes: Lawful People
Combat Role: Tanking/Stealing

Clothing/Appearance: 1.5 Inch Wide Steel Metal Collar, no idea what he should wear. Eye Color: Orange. Hair Color: Yellow. Hair Style: Short.

He stole a priceless painting from a wealthy aristocrat. Unfortunately it was the last mistake he did before he was caught soon after leaving the front door. He never was really that bright as a criminal and nobody before that bothered even seriously to catch him. Now he is a simple redeemable, albeit way too strong for a man of his age. Rumors has it that he took too many steroids in the past. Also, his real name is shrouded in mystery.

Things to Note

Government is so oppressive that they make everyone wear a steel metal collar. However the redeemable versions of the collars has their name written onto them in a nameplate. “Normal” collars don’t have such name plate indicating that they are “free” citizens who “follow” the law.

Back in the day, Government used to be simply called as the “Empire” but after they conquered the most of the world, they changed their name, due reasons unknown by their ancestors. However history books claim that it was due war became too expensive and their society rebelled against them.

Due the rebellion that was barely won by the Empire, which then turned to Government, new oppressive system was put in effect which required every citizen to wear a steel metal collar, to remind them to not rebel ever again. These collars can’t be simply removed and those seen without one are to be executed by defying the law.

Mechanics

Buy redeemables. Buying redeemables grant experience/levels to your party (Sayako, Sachiko and Tsuyoi.) and Sayako sets them free after a while. They will then send useful items to your party once they have reached safety, far from Government territories.
 
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Considering alternative terminologies for "slave" etc that is not like "prisoner."

Any suggestions?

Maybe I should just call them "astrayers" or something. Not a real word but I like it.

Still, why not just call what it is.
 
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Chattel, maybe?
 

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Redeemable?

Sayako the Damned Redeemer. ;)
 
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Just make sure that it's obvious that they are slaves under the government. It's such a strong word that would be advisable, in this situation, to find a place to put it. Possibly a buzzword that leaders of revolutions and politically corrupt individuals use.
 

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Well, I try to make setting so that it comes to player without being spoon fed to them.


I might switch to RPG Maker MV, so that means the project would be frozen on editor side of things until that tool comes out.
 

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