Slayer Elves - Quest For Orbs

[Evan Finkel]

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It is a story about Ahenmoro and Kalamono, Two countries with "in between" connections of war. Two orbs, one belongs to Ahenmoro country and another to Kalamono country, were stolen. The researchers of both countries' castle figured out, those orbs were taken away by The Ahenmoro's Prince and The Kalamono's Princess. King knows they loves each other and wants to be married. But Ahenmoro and Kalamono's Kings don't want them to be married. They're battles becomes more strong and powerful enough to defeat. A brave knight of Ahenmoro's castle (Ozar) recevied a notice from the King about a mission to go on a quest, with Kalamono's slayer girl (Sitella) , who teamed-up with Ahenmoro's Castle, the King and every village of Kalamono doesn't knows about it. But question is why the prince and princess takes the orbs? What they want with it? Slayer Elfs, Ozar and Sitella will find out the answer soon.

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The Country of Elves, Ahenmoro is a peaceful country with over 10000+ peoples living in all villages with peace and harmony. Ahenmoro is better then Kalamono, because they fight for good and peoples, not creatures. But prices level are high then Kalamono. That is why, most peoples live in Kalamono.​

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The Country of Darkness, Kalamono is a big country with over 50000+ peoples living in all villages with easiness but scared from Castle's knight. They fight for monsters, and other scary creatures. But for peoples, market prices are at a low level then Ahenmoro. That is why, most peoples live in Kalamono.​

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Ozar​

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Class - Knight​

Age - 163 (28 In human age)​

Race - Elf​

Weapon - 

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Power - Water​

Job - General of Ahenmoro knights​

Partner - Sitella​

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Biography -​

A brave knight who uses his magic spear called​

"Spatha" which holds the power of every wave. He is respected for his spear and the powers of water.

He has gone on a quest to save the orbs.

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Basic Information -​

Ozar is a high elf who is general of the Ahenmoro's knights.​

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Sitella​

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Class - Slayer​

Age - 141 (23 In human age)​

Race - Elf​

Weapon - 

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Power - Fire​

Job - Slayer knight of Kalamono (Joined Ahenmoro)​

Partner - Ozar​

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Biography -​

One belongs to Kalamono, she teamed-up with ​

Ozar to help him. Not just for because the princess gone with ahenmoro's prince. She have a reason for helping. Her huge sword holds fire power.​

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Basic Information -​

Sitella is a high elf who is a very powerful slayer of the Kalamono's knights.​

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Hue​

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Class - Alchemist​

Age - 26​

Race - Human​

Weapon - 

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Power - Lightning​

Job - NONE​

Partner - Lisa​

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Biography -​

An expert living guy with his cat-girl, Lisa. He living in a cave of a death forest because going out is dangerous. He has​

mastered alchemy and have 6 years of experience.​

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Basic Information -​

Hue is a human who has mastered alchemy art, and can do it anytime in the gameplay.​

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Lazord

 

Class - Warrior

Age - ??

Race - ?? (Half human and half lizard)

Weapon - 

Power - Acid Powers

Job - NONE (was a knight of a forgotten castle)

Partner - NONE

Biography -

An insect warrior who is made with acid of lizard.

His power holds the darkness of the green acid. He was half-dead in a war, Dr. Alex restore his powers again but he losts his memory.

 

Basic Information -

Lazord's race is unknown and epic. He losts his memory after Dr. Alex raise him again.

 

Lisa

 

Class - Catgirl

Age - 19

Race - Cat human

Weapon - 

Power - Fire

Job - NONE

Partner - Hue

Biography -

A cute cat-girl who holds the power of flame. She

lives with her partner Hue. Her weapon's nya-claws are very affective on flying monsters. She is not an English speaking cat, but her partner teaches her.

 

Basic Information -

Lisa is a cat-girl who uses two flaming claws.

 

Edge

 

Class - Ninja

Age - 26

Race - Human

Weapon - 

Power - Draining

Job - NONE

Partner - NONE

Biography -

First ninja of the country who uses shield and dark

arabian-type sword, He holds the power of draining. He is very jealous and selfish.

 

Basic Information -

Edge is a ninja human with an red Arabian sword.

Fada

 

Class - Healer

Age - 200 (20 in human age)

Race - Angel Elf

Weapon - 

Power - Holy

Job - NONE

Partner - NONE

Biography -

An angel who is a mastered healer. She is really

kind and calm girl. Her staff holds holy energy. She meets Ozar to join him on his mission.

 

Basic Information -

Fada is an angel who can be seen in a base of elves.

 

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These maps are current in development. (NOW OUTDATED)​

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And that's it folks, if you like the game your fan arts are welcome, and finally thanks to all who helped us developing this game.​

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Zalett, RM VXAce,​

Kevin, Lunara,​

Yanfly, Celianna, Victor Sant​

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Current arts. (Fan arts and arts by members of the game)​

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[That Bread]

Ah here it is, as promised heres my feedback.

I'm going to list off in topic order what I think of this game, just by reading it.

Title- sorry I don't like it. Why? It just doesn't sound interesting or creative.

Story- Goodness some of the names here are tongue twisters, my mind started to register the K as kushubala. You may want to read this... some unnecessary "wants". That aside I can see a Romeo and Juliet concept between the two kingdoms offspring, I like how you are the outsider of the relationship. The sword to their relationship! I like the concept so far, its not all about the war.

The Worlds

Alermro

Ah the "good" country! All is at peace and... what...wait... really?

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"The Country of Elfs, Ahenmoro is a peaceful country with over 10000+ peoples living in all villages with peace and relaxness. "

Ok I think that last part can be cut off or you could simply say "people living in all villages of harmony" You should look at the rest as well, sorry but I got lost at the peoples part. Consider revising it.

Kalmeno

Oh ho! The "bad" country, but they have low prices to bait people.

The cast... I got a kick out of the cute animated sprites! Good job, their nice. Besides that theres not much to go off of on the characters. When I read it, its just stats... this is in early project feedback so I'm sure you'll have bios up for them soon.

Screen shots, I'm not an expert on maps. With that in mind here I go.

The first map looks nice, but I dunno is something missing? I can't put my finger on it, but something feels amiss.

I still think the tittle could use some work on the name. Slayer elves its ok but maybe you should lay off the 2 orbs...

Well there you go, some early project feedback! I know this is early, but some of your paragraphs need to be looked at and the tittle still bothers me. If you like the title then keep it! Thats what I say, beyond that this project does have alot of potential growth. There are plenty of places where you can throw a plot twist.

Oh if your wondering why I put "good" and "evil". Truly I do not believe that there is truly a good or an evil, only a persons perspective of both sides. Other words, the "evil" person may think that their doing something right, even if they are completely mad.

 

[Z3br4]

One thing from the first Gameplay screenshot: it should be "Where is it" rather than "Where it is".

 

[Evan Finkel]

Thanks for your feedback s! I am really happy now. i cannot write much on phone. But i really appreciate it. And cosmos, story is about 2 orbs. So cant lay the 2 orbs off. But i can fix the elves spelling in the title. And of course, animations are cute. :3 haha

 

[Bonkers]

I like the behaviors you did.  How far along is the game towards a demo?  Are you doing to do more behaviors for the other 6 characters?  

 

[Evan Finkel]

Thanks. Demo will be released after 5-4 months, though. And animations will be done for every character.

 

[That Bread]

Ah... well a tittle doesn't always have to have everything that something is about within the tittle even if its important, but as I said before if your happy with it then keep it.

Sometimes I tittle my stories with a word or a phrase that relates to the story, but in a nice obscure way. Letting the reader interpret the tittle through first thoughts. A good example of having some central item like 2 orbs, would be the Legend of Zelda. A central item is the 3 pieces of triforce, instead they call it Legend of Zelda. Some LZ games have subtitles because it is a series, I don't know if this is what your going for.

 

[Evan Finkel]

Here Is a new title.

 

[That Bread]

Nice Zalett I think that works better, it has more flow to it and I don't feel like I'm pausing to read it.

 

[Evan Finkel]

Not actual a big update.. But I am currently with animations.. and finished the some from remaining ones. Bios for characters are half of done and cast will updated with bios and more status.

 

 

And last word, icons. I enjoy the style of them, but not as telling the concepts to the artist.

 

Updated cast with bio and status.

 

[Evan Finkel]

Here is a cute hand-made art of Ozar. Credits goes to kevin.

All other fan arts are welcome. 

 

[Evan Finkel]

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[That Bread]

I had to go with the nya heart claws!   It was just too hard to resist.

 

[Z3br4]

Just a little thing of mine: it's Angels, not Angles. (Sorry, that always bugs me; a lot of people do that.)

 

[Evan Finkel]

Thanks for the voting. I appreciate.

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How foolish, I haven't noticed the spellings @#*!!

 

[That Bread]

zallet, you spelled angel wrong. Thats what they are talking about, right now you have angle as in (an-gal) instead of angel (an-jel). Angle as in right angle, obtuse angle and acute angle. Catching my angle?

 

[Evan Finkel]

Oh..dear?? God, I'll fix.

 

[Evan Finkel]

Updated cast with new actor.

Lazord

Class - Warrior

Age - ??

Race - ??

Weapon - 

Power - Acid Powers

Job - NONE (was a knight of a forgotten castle)

Partner - NONE

No bio and basic information yet!

 

[Evan Finkel]

Voting for weapons poll is finished, so most voted weapon was Nya Heart Claws, some improvement I done with skills.

Improvement-

Burning claws skill to Fire Claws.

Fire Claws - Claws with flaming effects. MP: 5

New skills/abilities-

Kiss - Puts one enemy to sleep. TP: 4

Cato's Nya - Increases LUK. TP: 7

Flaming Dance - Dance with flaming claws. Flaming effects. MP: 20

I'll like hear to your skill too. Thanks for the voting. I hate claws!!

 

[Evan Finkel]

As you can see, we are currently doing with thread arts. So we made a banner for who want to support our little project.

Just "select" the banner and "copy", go to your profile and then "Edit my Profile" > "Signature" [You can see it on the left] and then "paste", that's it. [Please check it if it's linked or not, it helps us to get more supports.]

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